User talk:Baryos98/sandbox

Almost ready to publish

Dear Ms Josef

This is excellent. Thank you for including your edits in bold in the sandbox. Hebrew translations good addition. Am I correct there is no article existing in English? Your FNs and sources need to be sorted out. Giving you 15 points until the next version. DH--DHertzGSR (talk) 15:27, 20 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Professor Hertz,

Thank you so much! I will sort out my FNs and sources. There is an English version: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Black_Panthers_(Israel)

Thanks,

Bar — Preceding unsigned comment added by Baryos98 (talk • contribs) 21:16, 20 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Professor Hertz,

I updated my sources. Can I publish?

Thanks,

Bar — Preceding unsigned comment added by Baryos98 (talk • contribs) 21:27, 24 November 2018 (UTC)[reply]