User talk:Bikergroschen

Hello. I had to remove the addition you brought to the Mobile Fidelity Sound Lab. More specifically, you wrote: "Using 'Mark-Levingson' electronic only completely wired in 'Monster Cable'to prevent from negative impact on the electronic chain". There is a number of issues with this contribution:

1. It is very badly written and formatted.
2. The first brand you mention is not Mark-Levingson, but Mark Levinson (it was named after its founder, Mr. Mark Levinson).
3. The line "only completely wired in 'Monster Cable'to prevent from negative impact on the electronic chain" part reads too much like an advertisement for Monster Cable's products (it implies that only this particular brand's wiring does not have any negative impact on the "electronic chain" - and I'm not even sure if the "electronic chain" term is valid).
4. There is no citation to support what you wrote.

Believing that you wanted to improve the article, I'll suggest what you could have done to contribute something better than this:

1. You could read MFSL's website and locate the part where it lists the kind of equipment it uses.
2. Then, you could (with the help of a spell-checking tool if necessary - it's not a shame to use one, we all make spelling mistakes sometimes) carefully add this information, supporting it by a citation pointing it to where you found the information.
3. Additionally, you could tell others in the article's talk page about the addition you made, asking other contributors for help and corrections.

Remember, Wikipedia is a collaborative work, so we all step in to improve/correct someone else's work. Have a nice day. Moderatelyaverage (talk) 10:32, 19 April 2012 (UTC)[reply]