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The article Ukuthwasa you nominated as a good article has failed ; see Talk:Ukuthwasa for reasons why the nomination failed. If or when these points have been taken care of, you may apply for a new nomination of the article. Message delivered by ChristieBot, on behalf of Sawyer-mcdonell -- Sawyer-mcdonell (talk) 03:20, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Sawyer-mcdonell thanks for the review. I will amend the article. I hope you do not mind if I tag you after I fix it, just to recheck. If you have more observations please include them. I understand your issues with using words like "journey" and "traditional practice" put I do not think I can change that as I do not want to upheld one view especially after South Africa adopted the Traditional Health Practitioners Act 35 of 2004 but I understand the sentiment. I also understand the contested sources used for the ritual part but whether the pratices is wrong or right, these sources converge when describing the event. FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:29, 5 March 2024 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of Bona Malwal
Hi there, I'm pleased to inform you that I've
Your GA nomination of Bona Malwal
The article
- have a done an extensive editing. Kindly look to the Bona Malwal: Revision history or the Talk:Bona Malwal/GA2 for improvement FuzzyMagma (talk) 15:10, 17 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Czarking0 thank you very much for reviewing the article, and its been a pleasure working with you. Take care FuzzyMagma (talk) 09:24, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- Likewise, I am going to take a little break from Sudanese topics because I like to keep it diverse but I will probably review another of your articles in the future as you are a great contributor to the Sudan project. The materials science stuff is a little over my head but thanks for your work there too Czarking0 (talk) 15:01, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
- @Czarking0 thank you very much for reviewing the article, and its been a pleasure working with you. Take care FuzzyMagma (talk) 09:24, 25 March 2024 (UTC)
Edit Request
Could you change the Jazz template to look more like this?
Could you also add this template to the page for Electro swing?
2600:6C5A:417F:528F:5133:C6EF:6EF6:639D (talk) 00:32, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
- can you please submit your request at Template talk:Jazz FuzzyMagma (talk) 09:45, 28 March 2024 (UTC)
Kingdom of Kush talk page
Hey fuzzy , their is a guy on the kingdom of Kush talk page, he seems angry with a historically sound edit that I and others contributed to, the conversation between him and me has become childish, can you moderate it or erase it ? thanks brother Jedorton (talk) 15:04, 29 March 2024 (UTC)
Ok I get I won't attack anybody
ok I understand I won't attack other editors Jedorton (talk) 14:28, 30 March 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for doing that. FuzzyMagma (talk) 13:29, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
Amend ?
By amend you mean removing my negative comments on the kingdom of Kush/talk/Noba board ? if so I can do that Jedorton (talk) 14:47, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
- Yes FuzzyMagma (talk) 17:51, 31 March 2024 (UTC)
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Comments on an article please
I would be interested in your comments on
- Very nice work @Ldm1954. I will read it in details ASAP. If you feel like nominating the article to a GA, please do and I will review it by the end of April. I’m sure it will pass with some minor comments. Thanks for writing such a detailed article. FuzzyMagma (talk) 07:25, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
- a very superficial look into a really excellent article
... or a five-fold twin is a type of twinned particle
should it be "twinned crystal".(They also observed single crys ..
, remove the bracket.(see later)
, make an internal link using #, as you did withlarge volumes -- see also
below.- cite some sources to avoid WP:weasel(as you did in different parts) for
While most of the details of the formation of fiveling nanoparticles are now understood,
Many papers have suggested possible links to heterogeneous catalysts.
In crystals the strains can be slightly different, the full details of which are still being debated.
, here it helps the reader (including myself) to find more details I have asked for an image -- will nag themNo experimental evidence has been found for this process.
Any thoughts on a rephrasing? It needs to be said, but you can't cite nothing!
- The figure labelled
Atomistic simulation of disclination movement in decahedral particles, showing ..
can be made bigger.
, hence the question of what
is that you asking? Avoid editorialising as perMOS:EDITORIAL, the next sentence need sourcing if it is not from the Berry and Wales work.
- similar to
While there are similarities, they are not the same and quasicrystals are now considered to be different from fivelings and the related icosahedral structures.
- Further reading section might be worth it and will compliment the External links section. Hmmmm
- there is a space at the end of "See also" section Android editor bug
redlinkIno decahedron, I think they fit the Wikipedia:Red linkor at least be bolden and redirect should be created to point to the section about them
- for Formation at the nanoscale section, can you also upload some images from In Situ Atomic-Scale Observation of 5-Fold Twin Formation in Nanoscale Crystal under Mechanical Loading article, they are available under CC-BY 4.0.
- Do we need a section for Formation at the micro-scale (more than 100 nanometres), see this example tricky. I have added a little, but this may not be the same
- How about a section about their effect: given my background, I understand they have a profound effect on the (micro)mechanical properties, e.g., 1 and 2. I added a bit, but I think it is a bit of a digression. In the process of hunting I found Nanomechanics which needs major work, no refs
- last thing, the article name, it seems that "five-fold twin" is used widely than Fiveling. See There are too many names! Fiveling was the original one, so I will stay with that. Add redirects later
PS: it is really intimidating to review the work of someone with your in-depth knowledge about the topic. You have a a significant scientific phenomena named after you! so my review will be mostly about how we can get more from you :). Thank you for work. FuzzyMagma (talk) 10:36, 3 April 2024 (UTC)
- Thanks for all your suggestions, most of which I have incorporated. I just moved it to main space, and will add some links. I want to wait a week before doing a GA nomination, but I do think that is appropriate. Ldm1954 (talk) 00:33, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
- nice work, do not forget to expand the lead FuzzyMagma (talk) 09:39, 10 April 2024 (UTC)
Your GA nomination of National Public Health Laboratory (Sudan)
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Your GA nomination of National Public Health Laboratory (Sudan)
The article
Your GA nomination of National Public Health Laboratory (Sudan)
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✠ SunDawn ✠ (contact) 06:25, 12 April 2024 (UTC)
The file File:Synthesised Sudan album cover.webp has been proposed for deletion because of the following concern:
Non-free album cover being used in a decorative manner in
WP:NFCC#8is evident.
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will stop the proposed deletion process, but other deletion processes exist. In particular, the speedy deletion process can result in deletion without discussion, and files for discussion allows discussion to reach consensus for deletion. -- Marchjuly (talk) 21:20, 14 April 2024 (UTC)
- You WP:NFC#cite_note-3, which is where the file is going to end up being discussed next if nothing changes. -- Marchjuly (talk) 07:48, 16 April 2024 (UTC)]
- The sentence that starts with “
Vik Sohonie, founder …
” is about the album. I can create an article or make a clear subsection for the album if the will make it easier to spot FuzzyMagma (talk) 08:44, 16 April 2024 (UTC)- Non-free cover art (album covers, book covers, video game box covers, etc.) is generally OK to use per Wikipedia's non-free content use policy when the cover art is being used for primary identification purposes in the main infobox or at the top of a stand-alone article about the work the cover art represents. That's why you often find non-free book covers being used in stand-alone articles about books, non-free album covers being used in stand-alone articles about albums and non-free video game box covers being used in stand-alone articles about video games. Trying to use non-free cover art in other ways or in other articles tends to be much much harder to justify and is pretty much never allowed unless there is sourced critical commentary relevant encyclopedically to readers somewhere in the article that significantly improves the reader's understanding of article content about the cover to such a degree that omitting the cover art from the article would be detrimental to that understanding. That might seem like a high hurdle, but how relevant policy has been applied over the years to such non-free content. This is one of the reasons why you seldom see non-free book covers in articles about the authors, non-free album covers in articles about bands, non-free video game box covers in articles about video game companies/designers. Moreover, pretty much anytime you do find such files being used in such articles, they've usually been added in good faith but they're almost always not compliant with relevant policy.In this particular case, the album the cover art represents is mentioned by name only twice in the article and one of those mentions is in the file's caption. (Btw, you might want to check the spelling of the album's name in the caption because it's different from the spelling of the name in the body of the article.) There might be content about the album in the body of the article, but none it is (or at least seems to be) about the album's cover itself. In other words, take out the image and read the article; if there's basically no or very little loss in understanding about what's written about the album, there's probably no valid justification for using the cover art.If you feel the article satisfies ]
- I definitely do not think you assessed the situation incorrectly. I just thought my argument can hold water given that half of the article is about the album (not necessarily the album cover itself but that is also true for most album pages here).
- I can find some exceptions where there is an album cover in an musician wikipage, as I saw some album pages being merged after a discussion. BUT that is beside the point, so if you still think - based on your excellent experience - that this album cover doesn’t meet the requirements for a free-use, then I will revert my edit and put the PROD back. I still see that it serves many purposes as it shows the artist, links its style with different cultural aspects; it’s really powerful but maybe I am biased. FuzzyMagma (talk) 20:20, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- Often when people merge stand-alone articles about albums into other articles, very little if any consideration is given to the use of non-free content and how it's affected by the merge. Most users just seem to incorrectly assume that the content is OK to use because it's already be approved for use. Many don't even bother to update the content's non-free use rationale to reflect the new article when the content is now being used and the way it's now being used. So, while I'm sure you've seen cases of album covers being used in articles about bands/musicians, most of these are probably not policy compliant and just haven't been noticed yet. Moreover, non-free content use is, in principle, suppossed to be assessed on a case-by-case basis as explained in WP:FFD to see whether you (or anyone else) can establish a consensus in favor of its use in the article. I will, however, ask an administrator who works with non-free content a lot to take a look and see if there's another way. -- Marchjuly (talk) 22:03, 18 April 2024 (UTC)]
- Just did option one and thanks for the detailed answer .. FuzzyMagma (talk) 22:44, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- That's your choice. A bot will probably add the template {{]
- Just did option one and thanks for the detailed answer .. FuzzyMagma (talk) 22:44, 18 April 2024 (UTC)
- Often when people merge stand-alone articles about albums into other articles, very little if any consideration is given to the use of non-free content and how it's affected by the merge. Most users just seem to incorrectly assume that the content is OK to use because it's already be approved for use. Many don't even bother to update the content's non-free use rationale to reflect the new article when the content is now being used and the way it's now being used. So, while I'm sure you've seen cases of album covers being used in articles about bands/musicians, most of these are probably not policy compliant and just haven't been noticed yet. Moreover, non-free content use is, in principle, suppossed to be assessed on a case-by-case basis as explained in
- Non-free cover art (album covers, book covers, video game box covers, etc.) is generally OK to use per Wikipedia's non-free content use policy when the cover art is being used for primary identification purposes in the main infobox or at the top of a stand-alone article about the work the cover art represents. That's why you often find non-free book covers being used in stand-alone articles about books, non-free album covers being used in stand-alone articles about albums and non-free video game box covers being used in stand-alone articles about video games. Trying to use non-free cover art in other ways or in other articles tends to be much much harder to justify and is pretty much never allowed unless there is sourced critical commentary relevant encyclopedically to readers somewhere in the article that significantly improves the reader's understanding of article content about the cover to such a degree that omitting the cover art from the article would be detrimental to that understanding. That might seem like a high hurdle, but how relevant policy has been applied over the years to such non-free content. This is one of the reasons why you seldom see non-free book covers in articles about the authors, non-free album covers in articles about bands, non-free video game box covers in articles about video game companies/designers. Moreover, pretty much anytime you do find such files being used in such articles, they've usually been added in good faith but they're almost always not compliant with relevant policy.In this particular case, the album the cover art represents is mentioned by name only twice in the article and one of those mentions is in the file's caption. (Btw, you might want to check the spelling of the album's name in the caption because it's different from the spelling of the name in the body of the article.) There might be content about the album in the body of the article, but none it is (or at least seems to be) about the album's cover itself. In other words, take out the image and read the article; if there's basically no or very little loss in understanding about what's written about the album, there's probably no valid justification for using the cover art.If you feel the article satisfies ]
- The sentence that starts with “
History of Medicine in Sudan
Hello, here's a talk with lots of interesting material for one or more articles. On my side, there's too much to do right now, but this sounds just like your kind of subject. Tarek Elhadd has many publications at https://search.worldcat.org/de/search?q=au=%22ELHADD%2C%20TARIK%22 😉 And here is his talk on video: https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=7oIEXI04VUc&t=991s&pp=2AHfB5ACAQ%3D%3D&noapp=1 Cheers, Munfarid1 (talk) 14:03, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
- Nice! I was looking to write more about Health in Sudan, and will start working with these incredible sources ASAP! Thanks alot for finding them FuzzyMagma (talk) 20:13, 16 April 2024 (UTC)
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