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Good start with this. Avoid phrases like "The latest government epidemiological data" - first of all, it may not be updated regularly, so you should define a date (eg. "According to a 2011 government report..." or similar), and secondly, since this is an international project, you need to specify which government - don't assume your reader is US-based. Spell out contractions and words like "third", and don't capitalize symptoms. A general copy-edit would be a good idea. You might consider changing the order of your subsections. I'm a little concerned about your choice of references: per

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Hey group. The article's long enough now that you could remove the stub tags at the bottom. Beyond that, take a look at your reference formatting - you've still got a couple of bare URLs, and you should try to make the format as consistent as possible between references. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:49, 9 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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