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Your submission at Articles for creation: Tom (Thomas Henry) Marlowe (November 11)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Tagishsimon was:

All things being equal, there's clearly a good article here. It is not ready for article place. It has issues including broken image links; unsuccessful attempts to embed third party images; bare references &c. But it also has borrowed too much from e.g. Spartucis ... we really cannot just pull three successive paragraphs when we have the capacity to paraphrase.

I question some of the digressions. This is an article about the individual. Do we need three long sections on the background to a general strike? The section Annex: The UK economy in the early 1920s – Reasons for low growth: is wholly superfluous.

I hope the article is greatly pruned; and its format compared to other wikipedia articles such that the references and primary sources cohere.

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Tagishsimon (talk) 19:25, 11 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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