User talk:Rbachman27

Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. Everyone is welcome to make constructive contributions to Wikipedia, but at least one of your recent edits, such as the one you made to

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  talk) 22:55, 19 September 2011 (UTC)[reply
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Hi! I understand completely. That was a major edit that I should have submitted for approval first. I just went ahead and saved a draft in project space (under Gayot) and submitted it for your approval. Please let me know if this new draft fits Wikipedia’s standards and if the new references are appropriate. Thanks!--Rbachman27 (talk) 23:52, 19 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]

The biggest problem is that what you submitted is plagiarized, at least in part, from other websites. The first string I googled at random turned up several other websites with the exact same wording. Wikipedia articles must be based on

reliable sources but they must also written in a way that extracts facts from those sources without copying them word for word. Cheers.Griswaldo (talk) 00:06, 20 September 2011 (UTC)[reply

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Okay. I will work on a new draft that is completely fresh. Thanks for your help!--Rbachman27 (talk) 00:12, 20 September 2011 (UTC)[reply]