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The article was promoted by Gog the Mild via FACBot (talk) 9 July 2021 [1].

2001 Football League First Division play-off Final

Nominator(s): The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:09, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about the single most valuable association football match in the world. This one, played two decades back, was in the "Millennium Stadium-era" and winning the game was estimated to have been worth around £30 million. I'll address all constructive comments as soon as practicable, thanks in advance for your time. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:09, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Image review - pass

  • Image licensing looks good (t · c) buidhe 20:45, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Buidhe! The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:48, 22 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support from ChrisTheDude

Comments
ChrisTheDude yo, thanks for that. I've addressed and responded to all the above. Let me know what you think and/or there's anything else I can do. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 19:34, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support from Cas Liber

  • Support from me WRT comprehensiveness and prose. Nothing glaring prose-wise is jumping out at me but I concede my eye is not the most thorough - a nice read Cas Liber (talk · contribs) 01:37, 25 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - pass

Will do one soon. Hog Farm Talk 19:10, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • I vaguely remember asking about this before at a football FAC, but I have no idea which one it was and don't remember what the answer was: what are the credentials for the Football Club History Database?
  • Other sources are reliable for what they are citing
  • Source formatting looks fine.
  • I spot checked five or so citations for source-text integrity and copyright and saw no issues.

Aside from the question about FCHD above, the sourcing here looks fine. Hog Farm Talk 05:26, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

FCHD is brought up periodically, it's considered reliable, see this archive. It's non-controversial stuff it's used for in any case. Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 10:34, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support from Amakuru

Route to the final
Background
Summary
  • Just as a general point, the first half seems to have quite a bit less text than the second. Are there any other events of note from the half that aren't mentioned?
    I don't believe so. I have scoured contemporaneous sources and current day discussions and that is the sum total. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:25, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Details
  • Are there no kit colours? We usually see those on articles of this nature. We sometimes see little flags next to the players too, to indicate their nationality, although I don't know if any of that's a formally agreed part of the FOOTY style guide.
    I'm dead against the inclusion of trivial and decorative flags which form no part of critical commentary. They are often unreferenced as well. As for kit colours, sure I'll need to find someone to do that for me as I have had no joy doing it myself. Unless you want to help?? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:25, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Post-match
  • "I can't quite put what I feel into words ... I feel like the world has come off my shoulders. It is a phenomenal achievement". - the full stop should probably be inside the quote, since it terminates a complete sentence.
    Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:22, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "clean sheet" - wikilink to a glossary term?
    I seem to recall wikilinking inside a quote is generally frowned upon in case it puts a different meaning to that which was meant originally. But I've linked it to our own Wikipedia article. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:22, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The Guardian reported that Holdsworth was the man of the match" - was he the official man of the match? If so, it probably isn't necessary to say that "The Guardian reported..." and if it was a Guardian specific award, then should probably clarify that too.
    Well you've identified it perfectly and hence that's why it's worded as it is. No sign of official-ness and no sign of Guardian-specific. Just that the Guardian said it was Holdsworth... The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:22, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Nat Lofthouse, described by the BBC" - do we need his first name on the second mention?
    Sure, gone. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:22, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "won the FA Cup in '58" - you could link to an appropriate article here
    See above re linking inside quotes, but sure, why not. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:22, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "to postpone his retirement from professional football to follow a legal career in Iceland" - I mis-parsed this, and thought that he did move to Iceland rather than that didn't. Maybe rephrase along the lines of "Bolton's Bergsson had intended to retire at the end of the season to follow a legal career in Iceland, but after securing promotion....."
    Done. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:22, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Lead

No issues that I can see.  — Amakuru (talk) 17:58, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Amakuru kit detail aside (can you help?) the rest has been addressed or at least attempted to be talked away...... Cheers! The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 18:25, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I've added a couple of kits, based off photos of the event. We can tweak the colours a bit if you think they're off, but otherwise all your fixes look acceptable. Re detail of coverage, I could probably dig some more facts out if I were to get back on to the British Library's microfiche reader as I did with the Swindon Advertiser, but it's a matter of judgement anyway so I'll not let that get in the way. Happy to support, good work.  — Amakuru (talk) 19:51, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Query for the coordinators

@FAC coordinators: with three supports and both an image & source review passed, could I list another nomination? Cheers. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:00, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Gog the Mild you appear to be the only FAC delegate making more than the odd sporadic edit, what do you reckon? The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 20:46, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I reckon that you may. Gog the Mild (talk) 20:49, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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