Wikipedia:Featured article review/Knights Templar/archive1

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The article was delisted by Nikkimaria via FACBot (talk) 1:54, 26 March 2022 (UTC) [1].

Knights Templar

Notified:

WP Christianity, WP Secret Societies, WP England, WP France, WP Organizations, noticed on January 21, 2022

• Thank you for bringing this up, I agree that the article is worth a re-review. As the editor who brought it to FA back in 2007, I'm taking a look now. It appears that most of the History Channel references, which I agree are unreliable, were added to sections alongside other reliable sources, so it's a simple fix for those: I've removed all of them except for one in the Popular Culture section, where it seems appropriate. Thank you also for noting other sources on the talkpage, I'm working my way through and will comment there as well. --Elonka 17:23, 20 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• DelistComment: This is a controversial topic which (as Hog Farm observes) has a lot of fringe views and conspiracy theories attached to it. It is therefore incredibly important that we get this right. Since listing, the article has doubled in size - which is not a good sign. The reference section is all over the place. There is quite some reliance on the History Channel, self-published web sites and the like. There appears to be an adequate number of good quality reliable sources on the subject. It should therefore be quite possible to write an article without the need to resort to questionable sources. Cinderella157 (talk) 03:58, 20 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  WP:FAR; keep or delist are not declared in this phase. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:35, 27 February 2022 (UTC)[reply

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OK, so this is a comment that it doesn't meet the criteria at several points. I think it falls short of being comprehensive. It has a "rise" and a "fall" section but nothing in between. It doesn't tell you much about them either. They were all over Europe and not just in the Holy Land and only 10% were knights. It doesn't make it clear what the other 90% were doing all over Europe - and particularly, why they were doing it all over Europe. (OK a broad brush but you get the idea) The article states: With its clear mission and ample resources, the order grew rapidly. I'm not seeing where its mission is clearly stated. Cinderella157 (talk) 03:34, 27 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• Comment: Thank you for inviting for me to comment on this proposal
  WP:RS. As User:Hog Farm has correctly noted, however, there are some sources, such as those sourced to a website hosted on MSN, that should be supplanted. If this is done, I would see no reason to remove the FA status. I hope this helps. With regards, Anupam^Talk 05:01, 26 February 2022 (UTC)[reply
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• MOS:SANDWICHing
  in the top portions of the article to be resolved.
• The end of the article is a series of one-paragraph sections; better section organization and themes may be needed.
• Copyedit needed: this is one sentence:

  Beginning in the 1960s, there have been speculative popular publications surrounding the order's early occupation of the Temple Mount in Jerusalem and speculation about what relics the Templars may have found there, such as the quest for the Holy Grail or the Ark of the Covenant,[115] or the historical accusation of idol worship (Baphomet) transformed into a context of "witchcraft".

• There are HarvRef errors throughout the sources.
• FAs are supposed to be comprehensive; lengthy See also needs to be rationalized (links worked into article where possible).
• Further reading needs to be pruned.
• Google Scholar hits only since 2018; has a survey of recent scholarship been completed, and is the article comprehensive?

SandyGeorgia (Talk) 05:03, 27 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• I'm still a bit concerned about a few of the references, particularly - " Louis Charpentier, Les Mystères de la Cathédrale de Chartres (Paris: Robert Laffont, 1966), translated The Mysteries of Chartres Cathedral (London: Research Into Lost Knowledge Organization, 1972)." If this is the publisher I think it is, this source could well be
  WP:FRINGE. Hog Farm _Talk 16:28, 1 March 2022 (UTC)[reply
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• None of the issues I raised have been addressed, and there have been no edits since Feb 27. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 02:05, 9 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• Move to FARC, sadly, sourcing still needs improved and there haven't been significant edits so far this month. Hog Farm _Talk 16:46, 11 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• Move to FARC issues still present (t · c) buidhe 00:02, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

FARC section

Issues raised in the review section include sourcing and prose. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:46, 12 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• Delist no improvement (t · c) buidhe 03:48, 22 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• Delist no improvement - particularly coverage but other stuff mentioned above. Cinderella157 (talk) 05:15, 22 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• Delist. Some structural problems with the reader being told in three separate places in the article body that the Order of Christ is a successor order. DrKay (talk) 16:48, 22 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• Delist As per the above. Hchc2009 (talk) 21:12, 22 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• Delist - improvements in late February, but more is needed. Hog Farm _Talk 13:25, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]
• Delist Sources are disorganised and some listed sources are not used as inline citations. Short, one paragraph sections in "Legacy" need to be merged. No active improvements since Feb. Z1720 (talk) 20:53, 23 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

• Closing note: This removal candidate has been delisted, but there may be a delay in bot processing of the close. Please leave the {{featured article review}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:54, 26 March 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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