Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/In Flames discography

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• The following year appeared their second EP, Black-Ash Inheritance, and the full-length album Whoracle. - comm after year and add the word "they" after that new comma
  • "The following year, they appeared their second EP...[?]"
    • Are you trying to say "They released their second EP the following year?"--TRUCO 16:52, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
      • "The following year, appeared their second EP..."
        loki 17:28, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply
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        • Do you mean The following year, they appeared on their second EP?--TRUCO 18:45, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
          • "The following year, they issued their second EP, Black-Ash Inheritance, and the full-length album Whoracle."--
            loki 21:01, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply
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            • Perfect.--TRUCO 21:40, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
              • Done.--
                loki 21:51, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply
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• Clayman followed in the same vein the next year, reaching the top 20 on the same countries. - "in" not on"
  • Done.
• The tour to promote it, was released as the live album, The Tokyo Showdown (2001), again charted on Sweden and Finland, this time reaching the top 40. - --> The tour to promote it was released as The Tokyo Showdown (2001) live album, which also charted in Sweden and Finland; the album reached the top 40.
  • Done.
• In many of these sentences, you say "on Sweden and Finland" which sounds incorrect, if you want to word it like that, it should be "on the Swedish and Finnish charts"
  • Whats your response on this?--TRUCO 16:52, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    • Ah, done.
      loki 17:28, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply
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• Reroute to Remain (2002), peaked at number 5 on Sweden and Finland,[1][2] and number 10 on the Billboard Top Heatseekers chart. - no need for the first comma, take my word about the "on" and the countries comment above
  • Done
• The album was backed by the single "Come Clarity", that even released in a limited edition, reached the number 52 in their home country. - do you mean ..which was released is a limited edition that reached number 52 in their home country?
  • Done.
    • I'm trying to explain, which same released in a limited edition, it reached number 52 in their home country. (or something like)
      loki 16:44, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply
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• Tables/listed content/sources check out fine.--TRUCO 15:20, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

And that's it. Take care of the above and I'd be happy to support. Drewcifer (talk) 20:05, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for take a look.

loki 20:33, 28 January 2009 (UTC)[reply

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