Comments Firstly, sorry I didn't get to the peer review. When I used to review regularly here I frequently used to suggest that people got their lists peer-reviewed first, rather than bringing them here nowhere near ready expecting FLC to be a glorified peer review, so it's not really very impressive me failing to get to yours when it was open for ages. So some of this will be nit-picking PR-ish, for which again I apologise. Struway2 (talk) 11:48, 21 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Lead. Might read better as "first winner of a major trophy ...". The fact needs citing, and ideally, them having won something major needs mentioning before the fact depending on it.
- Can't find a ref for it so i have reworded and moved the major trophy mention higher up.
- Honours and achievements. Remove sponsored name from image caption
- Done.
- Don't like them winning "over York City"; could turn it round to make it simply "when they beat York City 3-1 in the Conf..."
- Reworded.
- Could mention best top-flight finish in the prose; staying up is almost as much of an achievement as getting up :-)
- Very true, have added.
- Not sure you need two consecutive headings both saying (The) Football League
- Done.
- Added levels.
- Be consistent with your formatting: in the Football League section, you have a colon between Division and Champions, where in the Southern League, you have it between Champions and years
- Fixed.
- FA Cup season should be 1963–64, not 1963–1964, and link to that season's FA Cup article, not the generic ... in English football
- Changed both.
- Player records. Table sorting. You need to use the {{sort}} template to force the sorting order. What doesn't help, probably, is that you were copying the Gillingham list which also doesn't sort properly. Have a look at the code at Ipswich or Birmingham, both work, but they do it differently (at Birmingham, every entry uses the sort template, at Ipswich, only those entries that actually need the extra formatting have it). If you still can't sort it out yourself, I'll do it.
- I have added the sort template in both tables but the three problem columns still aren't sorting properly.
- I'd put notes a-c as explanatory notes below the table, rather than in a Notes section miles away
- Moved.
- Top goalscorers. Do something with the column widths so that the Total column, which logically should be at least as wide as the others if not wider, isn't all squashed up.
- Done.
- Contents of footnote D would be more helpfully placed in with the other explanatory notes above the table. The word "appearances" above that table is missing its initial "a"
- Added the a and Moved the footnote to under the table.
- Magilton image caption isn't a complete sentence so shouldn't have a full stop
- Removed.
- Removed flags.
- If you're keeping the flag/countries, be careful what you're choosing. Flags should reflect the player's sporting nationality, so e.g. the Scottish flag is totally wrong for
Anglo-Indian family who came to the UK as soon as India gained independence; if he's anything, he's British.
- N/A.
- Record transfer fees paid. Left-align player and club columns as per other tables. To sort the dates, use the {{
dts }} template: format each date like {{dts|format=dmy|1998|July|}}. Works with full dates or parts thereof.
- Done.
- Done.
- Saunders image caption: hyphenate "first million-pound signing"
- Done.
- Done.
- Club records. If you're having full stops at the end of each entry, check that you have them at the end of every entry
- Done.
- In the Honours bit, you used the format Second Division for "old" Div 2, and Division Two for "new", yet in this section you're using Division Two for both without distinction. The reader would think that Most FL goals and Fewest FL goals records were set at the same level, and they weren't. What I did was used the Second Division format throughout, and put (level 3) in brackets where 2nd Div didn't actually mean 2nd tier.
- Done.
- Points. Clicking on notes G and H doesn't do anything. Again, I'd include the content of the notes in the section they apply to.
- Moved.
- References. #5 and others. <code>|work=Football Club History Database |publisher=Richard Rundle</code>
:'''Done'''.
* #6. Should be <code>|work=The Guardian</code> or <code>|newspaper=The Guardian</code>, not <code>|publisher=Guardian</code>. Similarly #46 Oxford Mail. See [[Template:Cite news#Essential parameters]]
:'''Done'''.
* #7. <code>|work=Carling Cup official website |publisher=Coors Brewers</code>
- Done.
- #37. Is there nothing better than RageOnline for Mr Constable's recent stats?
- Not that i am aware of. Soccerbase doesn't include all of his appearances.
- Progressive transfer fees paid. I might right-align the fees column. Left this comment open, as I wasn't sure if you hadn't seen it or just chosen not to do it. Also, whether you change the alignment or not, suggest moving note B to above the table as an explanation. cheers, Struway2 (talk) 15:58, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Ahh i must have missed that somehow! I have aligned the column (also in Progressive transfer fees recieved) and moved the note. Eddie6705 (talk) 21:30, 23 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
I have made the above changes, and i will add the country name and check flags for the transfer fee tables later today. I have added the sort temp into the two tables, but the columns still don't sort properly. Would you be able to have a look? And don't worry about missing the peer review, its bound to happen where the timing is unfortunate for some people. Eddie6705 (talk) 15:47, 22 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- Now removed flags. Eddie6705 (talk) 18:25, 22 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]
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