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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:30, 29 August 2017 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of accolades received by Zootopia

List of accolades received by Zootopia (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Cowlibob (talk) 09:21, 17 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Zootopia is a 2016 animated film released by Walt Disney Pictures which tackled racism and intolerance and received accolades including the Academy Award for Best Animated Feature. This list gives a rundown of these as always look forward to all the constructive comments.Cowlibob (talk) 09:21, 17 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Some drive-by notes:

  • Would it be possible to center the images in the infobox? They look weirdly left-justified.
  • Refs 28, 29, 54, and 56 lack accessdates.

Best, BobAmnertiopsis∴ChatMe! 19:31, 20 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Bobamnertiopsis: Thanks for your comments. Centered the images. Added access dates for 28, 29. The other two are dead links which have archived links so access date would not be appropriate. Cowlibob (talk) 21:40, 20 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • " 3D computer-animated buddy comedy adventure film..." a few too many categories for me here!
  • A few short sentences in the opening para of the lead makes for slightly clunky prose.
  • Does ref 4 really back up the fact the film received its global premier in Denmark?
  • Would clarify that $ is US$.
  • "the film won for Best Animated Feature" no need for "for".
  • "included the film in their list of the top ten of 2016.[9]" -> "included the Zootopia in their list of the top ten films of 2016.[9]"
  • Infobox and table will need updating tomorrow following Saturn Awards (I'm sure you're tracking that but just thought I'd mention it).
  • "St. Louis Gateway Film Critics Association" why is Gateway included in the title of this group? It's a redirect and the source itself doesn't use the term.*Split the refs by "|30em" rather than "|2".

The Rambling Man (talk) 09:30, 27 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for your comments. I have fixed the above. I copied the genres from the parent article and have cut it down. Changed ref for premiere. St. Louis Gateway I think was the old name, have changed it. Cowlibob (talk) 09:31, 29 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for your support. Cowlibob (talk) 21:27, 9 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Aoba47
  • I would recommend adding ALT text to the images in the infobox.
  • In the sentence (The film was directed by Byron Howard and Rich Moore based on a screenplay written by Jared Bush (who also co-directed) and Phil Johnston.), I believe that you need "and was" between "Moore" and "based".

Aside from these two very minor notes, I believe that everything else in the list is very strong. Great work with it. Since my comments are minor, I support this for promotion.

Aoba47 (talk) 15:39, 1 August 2017 (UTC)[reply
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Aoba47: I think I've fixed the above. Thanks for the support. Cowlibob (talk) 18:20, 8 August 2017 (UTC)[reply
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@Giants2008: Thanks for picking that up. Have fixed it. Cowlibob (talk) 19:14, 24 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Source review passed, promoting. --PresN 14:24, 28 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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