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List of awards and nominations received by Natalie Portman

Featured list candidates/List of awards and nominations received by Natalie Portman/archive1

Nominator(s): ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 11:54, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Natalie Portman is an Israeli-American actress who has received various awards and nominations, including an Academy Award and two Golden Globe Awards. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 11:54, 12 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Support Well done - I couldn't find anything wrong. My only suggestion is that you wikilink Isabelle Huppert and Elle in the table. ~ HAL333 13:58, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from MWright96 (talk) 14:05, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

;Comments by MWright96

"and she was nominated for the" - nominations for the
" based on the 1988
MOS:OVERLINKING
in the same sentence
"In 2010, Portman appeared in Darren Aronofsky's psychological horror Black Swan, In the film she plays Nina Sayers, a 28-year-old dancer in a New York City ballet company," - think these two sentences can be merged together
"for which she won the Academy Award for Best Actress," - think this can begin a new sentence to avoid being a run-on sentence
"and she was nominated" - and nominations
"Portman has received one Teen Choice Award nomination" - received a
The acronyms (MCU) aren't needed since they are used only once
"In 2016, Portman starred in Pablo Larraín's biographical drama Jackie, in the film she portrayed Jacqueline Kennedy Onassis, in the days when she was First Lady in the White House." - In 2016, Portman starred in
Jacqueline Kennedy, when she was First Lady
in the White House.

Wikilink White House

On the whole, the years in the appropriate rows that are not wikilinked should be linked to the individual ceremonies

Same as with the awards in the convenient rows

"EMA board of directors Ongoing Commitment Award" - Board of Directors

Wikilink Mick LaSalle

Ref 2 work: "Academ of Motion Picture Arts and Sciences" - typo; missing the "y"

Ref 7 is missing the date it was published

Ref 19 title: "Winners 2016 Washington Dc Area Film Critics Association"." - Dc should be "DC"

Ref 46 is missing the date it was published and should mention the source is in Dutch

Those are all the points that stood out during my read through. MWright96 (talk) 13:28, 18 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96, Thanks for the comments. I have made these changes. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 12:50, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Support Nothing more from me. MWright96 (talk) 14:05, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

Sentence about Black Swan ends in a comma rather than a full stop
"Since 2011, Portman has received one Teen Choice Award nomination" - why "since 2011"? You could equally say "Since 1981, Portman has received one Teen Choice Award nomination". It just reads oddly......
"Best Depiction Of Nudity, Sexuality, or Seduction" => "Best Depiction of Nudity, Sexuality, or Seduction"
"EMA board of directors" => "EMA Board of Directors"
Russian Awards - she was nominated for specific roles in 2007 but not in later years?
Sorting order on the "result" column goes Won > Nominated > 3rd > 2nd > Runner-up, which doesn't seem right
Think that's it from me. Nice one! -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:45, 18 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ChrisTheDude, Thanks for the comments. I have made these changes. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 12:50, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The article still has "Since 2011, Portman has received a Teen Choice Award nomination for playing the Marvel Cinematic Universe character, Jane Foster" - why "since 2011"? I can't see any reason for that being there...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 07:24, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ChrisTheDude, She started to play Jane Foster since 2011 from Thor, sorry, I forgot to say that. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 08:08, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

OK, in that case it needs re-phrasing to "Portman has received a Teen Choice Award nomination for playing the Marvel Cinematic Universe character, Jane Foster, a role she has played since 2011" -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 08:37, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ChrisTheDude, Done, thanks! ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 09:00, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

One other thing I just noticed - under the MTV Awards, you rowspan Black Swan across three rows, but against the Alliance of Women Film Journalists you don't do the same. Better to do it the same way everywhere to be consistent...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 16:13, 19 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

ChrisTheDude, Done. ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 11:29, 20 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Support -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 09:20, 21 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Source review - Pass

Doing now, may take a second from the amount of refs. Based on your other lists though, I doubt I'll find much, if any :) Aza24 (talk) 07:21, 25 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ref 52 author and date missing
Ref 68 date? (or looks like just year in this case)
That's all I got, reliability looks good. After these minor fixes, easy pass for source review. Aza24 (talk) 07:39, 25 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Aza24, All done. Thanks for the review! ~~ CAPTAIN MEDUSA^talk 12:25, 25 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good work (as always!) pass for source review. Aza24 (talk) 00:00, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This
WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:07, 30 August 2020 (UTC)[reply
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