Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/List of bowlers who have taken a wicket with their first ball in international cricket/archive2

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List of bowlers who have taken a wicket with their first ball in international cricket

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Featured list candidates/List of bowlers who have taken a wicket with their first ball in international cricket/archive1
Featured list candidates/List of bowlers who have taken a wicket with their first ball in international cricket/archive2

Nominator(s): The Rambling Man (talk) 08:53, 24 May 2016 (UTC), Lugnuts (talk) 09:04, 24 May 2016 [reply]

This is a nice list, well referenced and illustrated. A lot of the work has been put in by Chamal N, Lugnuts and Sahara4u but only Lugnuts is editing regularly. I'm sure between he and me, we can address all concerns. The Rambling Man (talk) 08:53, 24 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Yep, count me in - I'll do my best to get another cricket-related star on my userpage! Lugnuts ^{Dick Laurent is dead} 09:04, 24 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

You say "pot-aaa-to", and "I say pot-ahh-to" / you say "tom-aaa-to" and I say "'List of bowlers who have taken a wicket with their first ball in international cricket' isn't the best title"...

Nice to see this here again. I see I reviewed it in 2010 and I have a feeling I pointed TRM in this direction of this list earlier in the year when
Bencherlite^Talk 10:23, 24 May 2016 (UTC)[reply
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Picky. But good picky. I think you did point me this way, but I completely forgot the discussion over the title. I agree that the title is misleading. Another alternative is for us to split the list into
List of bowlers who have taken a wicket with their first ball in T20I cricket. There are sufficient entries to meet the minimum for each format. While I'd prefer to keep them together, I'm reluctant to contrive a name that's so clunky it'll never show up anywhere... Any thoughts? The Rambling Man (talk) 10:29, 24 May 2016 (UTC)[reply
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Three lists would be overkill. Perhaps use those as redirects, though?
Bencherlite ^Talk 10:43, 24 May 2016 (UTC)[reply
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Getting greedy... (all would meet the
criteria!) Perhaps we can work on the prose to ensure its accurate, and try to gather a consensus on how best to name it? I don't mind the redirect stuff, in fact I'll do that right now. The Rambling Man (talk) 10:46, 24 May 2016 (UTC)[reply
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Having looked at the title issue, and for the lack of a better alternative that I can think of, I'd go with the previously suggested name of List of bowlers who have taken a wicket with their first ball in a format of international cricket. Lugnuts ^{Dick Laurent is dead} 10:42, 25 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thus moved. Now then, to the list itself please!

Bencherlite, if you're happy (or happyish) would you cap your comments on the name so we can encourage comments on the list itself please? Cheers. The Rambling Man (talk) 18:47, 25 May 2016 (UTC)[reply

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I've fixed the missing ODI names. TRM - can you take a look at the lead for the article? It states that Arthur Coningham was the first Test player, but the table/source states it's Tom Horan. There's a rather good source attached to Coningham, so I don't just want to butcher it! Lugnuts ^{Dick Laurent is dead} 11:29, 24 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comment – Can't we have separate pages for each format? 20, 22 and 12 seems like a reasonable fork. —Vensatry _(talk) 05:38, 26 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I did mention that above, but Bencherlite felt that a single list was more appropriate. I'm not fussed either way. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:04, 26 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'm not hellbent on that. Given that last six entries of the T20I table are from the last five years, it's more likely to grow. We can probably decide on this when the count reaches 20. —Vensatry _(talk) 06:38, 26 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds good to me, would you be able to review the list itself if you get time? Cheers. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:25, 26 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Sure, will review it before the weekend. —Vensatry _(talk) 09:10, 26 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comment – I strongly disagree with a separate pages for each list. I prefer the way it is right now with a single list, it is much more appropriate. There is not much difference in the lead that could be written, and they are all thematically similar. Mattximus (talk) 15:18, 28 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I support this too. Hopefully there's nothing major stopping this from being promoted up to FL. @Vensatry: - have you had the opportunity to review the list? Thanks in advance. Lugnuts ^{Dick Laurent is dead} 13:50, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from —Vensatry _(talk)

Comments from Vensatry

Inzy's image needs alt text
Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:13, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"The most recent is South African bowler Hardus Viljoen who dismissed the England captain Alastair Cook on 15 January 2016." Looks like something is missing after 'recent'. Secondly, do we really need the date here?
Merged so it makes a bit more sense. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:13, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Consider linking 'bowled out', 'leg before wicket' and 'tied match' in the lead.
Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:13, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"The most recent is Andrew Mathieson, from New Zealand, on 20 June 2015" This sentence reads like a hints developing passage.
Embellished. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:13, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"The first to achieve this feat was Australian Michael Kasprowicz who took wickets with his first and second delivery in the shortest international format, dismissing New Zealand's Stephen Fleming and Mathew Sinclair in 2005" Comma needed after Kasprowicz. Is 'shortest international format' bit necessary here? Perhaps, the year could be mentioned in the previous clause.
Moved around a bit. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:13, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
"Nadeem Ahmed and Paras Khadka took their first wickets during the same match in 2014, the former in the first innings of the match and the latter in the second" It's worth adding the names of the teams.
Added. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:13, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Daily Mail is not considered a reliable source.
It's no the only source. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:13, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I found the article on the BBC website and replaced the source. Lugnuts ^{Dick Laurent is dead} 19:25, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Link the first occurrence of CricketArchive in refs.
Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 19:13, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I'll do the source review shortly. This one is a personal preference: I can understand that the tables eat up most of the space, but is there a way to add a few more images to the article? —Vensatry _(talk) 18:19, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks Vensatry, as always. As for the images, I'm not sure how easy that would be, without compressing the tables. Are you suggesting we add, say a couple of images to the right of each table? The Rambling Man (talk) 19:14, 31 May 2016 (UTC)[reply]

The tables already have nine columns, so not sure about the placement of the images. —Vensatry _(talk) 16:28, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks @Vensatry: - I assume all the issues raised are now resolved. If there's anything else, please detail it here and we'll look at it. Thanks again. Lugnuts ^{Dick Laurent is dead} 07:22, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Link all the teams in the lead. You need to be consistent with dates in the lead - '1883', '15 January 2016', 'November 2015', et al.,

Done —Vensatry _(talk) 16:28, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Source review

"Only Maurice Tate, Intikhab Alam and Nathan Lyon went on to play in more than ten Tests" - Ref. missing for Lyon. Done
"The first to achieve this feat was Australian Michael Kasprowicz who took wickets with his first and second delivery in this format in 2005, dismissing New Zealand's Stephen Fleming and Mathew Sinclair." - You need to cite the 'second wicket' and 'Sinclair' parts. Done
- Is 'cricketcountry.com' a RS? —Vensatry _(talk) 12:04, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Spotchecks done for rest of the refs. in the lead - No issues.
Refs. for the three tables (main) - Ted Arnold's first victim was Victor Trumper, not Reggie Duff. Done

—Vensatry _(talk) 16:28, 6 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Vensatry: - apologies for the delay in getting back to you. I've now fixed everything per your comments above. I hope everything is now in order. Thanks again for reviewing this. @The Rambling Man: - please could you cast your eye over the article now, incase I've missed anything. Thanks! Lugnuts ^{Dick Laurent is dead} 08:57, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Vensatry: - re: the reliable source, I think it is, but in the avoidance of doubt, I've found a source from CricketArchive and replaced it. Lugnuts ^{Dick Laurent is dead} 18:49, 9 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support, nice work. —Vensatry _(talk) 06:27, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! Lugnuts ^{Dick Laurent is dead} 08:43, 10 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support Two small changes I might recommend:

1. "Not all of these bowlers took their first wicket in their debut match." -> "Not all of these bowlers took their first wicket in their debut matches."
2. Perhaps you might check if photo captions should contain the stops at the end of the caption sentences. My support any which way.
Lourdes 12:51, 23 June 2016 (UTC)[reply
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I'm not sure I agree with the first, there are multiple bowlers but they each only have a single debut. As for the second comment, both captions are complete sentences (i.e. not fragments) so the use of the full stop is correct. Thanks for the support. The Rambling Man (talk) 13:00, 23 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you. With respect to the "debut matches", I think I noticed a different usage in the next statement: "Clive Lloyd, Inzamam-ul-Haq, Sadagoppan Ramesh, and Martin van Jaarsveld did not bowl in their debut matches." So had an opinion that either it should be "match" in both statements or alternatively "matches". I may be wrong but and would defer to your opinion. Thanks and good work.

Lourdes 16:47, 23 June 2016 (UTC)[reply

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Support very nice looking list and, although looking hard, I couldn't find any issues except that maybe "no." should be defined in the key. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 12:08, 18 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]
Done. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:47, 21 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Question: The Rambling Man According to the sources on Flag of Australia, the current Australian flag was adopted in 1903, so the flag in the "For" column for Tom Horan and Arthur Coningham and in the "Against" column of Bill Bradley and Ted Arnold should be the Flag of None. Similarly, according to List of South African flags and [2], South Africa didn't have an official national flag in 1906, and the flag depicted came into use in 1928. Hence, the "For" column for Bert Vogler and the "Against" column for Jack Crawford should have the Flag of None, and the George Macaulay and Maurice Tate "Against" columns should have the 1912-28 flag. Joseph2302 21:37, 28 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Comment; while I was going through this list fixing a few minor sorting issues; I found that in the T20I list there is further issues with numbers 5 & 6. When sorting by date either backwards or normally they are in the wrong order. The weird thing is they aren't the same date unlike the other issues I fixed. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 07:16, 29 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Yellow Dingo, thanks. Sorry for not seeing these comments sooner. I'll look to address them tomorrow. Cheers. The Rambling Man (talk) 21:56, 31 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Yellow Dingo all done. Tomorrow turned into next week. As is life. Cheers. The Rambling Man (talk) 15:46, 7 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good. I have supported further up this FLC. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 06:12, 8 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Support Great list, and the minor issues have been fixed. Joseph2302 15:48, 7 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Source review

Sources are all OK - formatting good, spotchecks shown the information is supported and no copy vios. - SchroCat (talk) 07:18, 8 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Closing note: This
WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. - SchroCat (talk) 07:18, 8 August 2016 (UTC)[reply
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