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The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 8 August 2022 (UTC) [1].[reply]

List of songs recorded by Kyla

List of songs recorded by Kyla (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)

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Nominator(s): Pseud 14 (talk) 16:54, 26 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Having worked on list articles about actors for quite a while, here I am going back to where my FL journey began, working on list of songs by a music artist. Kyla is a Filipino R&B singer who first shot to fame in the early 2000s and remains to be the only artist from the Philippines to have received an MTV Video Music Award. This list includes songs she has recorded and released that span her two-decade career. Happy to address your comments and thanks to all who take the time to review the list. Pseud 14 (talk) 16:54, 26 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments

  • "Kyla's succeeding records" - I think "Kyla's next two records" would read more naturally
Done
  • "were cover albums. Both of which" => "were cover albums, both of which"
Done
  • "In 2010, she released her eight studio album" => "In 2010, she released her eighth studio album"
Silly me, I've corrected this
  • There's a Harv error in the table of contents for some reason
I don't think I'm seeing it, as I don't use Harvard citation style or notes. Is it from a software you use to flag harv errors?
OK I figured it out. For some reason you have [[#CITEREF2003|B]] in the TOC. Don't think the bit before the pipe should look like that...... -- ChrisTheDude (talk) 18:34, 26 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
@ChrisTheDude: ah now I see it, must've pasted something by mistake. All fixed now. Thanks for checking. Pseud 14 (talk) 18:50, 26 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Kyla is featured in rapper Young JV's single" => "Kyla is featured on rapper Young JV's single"
Done
Thank you for your review ChrisTheDude, I have addressed the above and have provided a comment on one item to clarify. Thanks --Pseud 14 (talk) 18:13, 26 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pamzeis

Not gonna screw this up

  • "her debut studio album Way to Your Heart." — comma after album; also, when was this released?
Avoided repeating the year 2000, so I added context to help clarify.
  • "third studio album I Will Be There was" — commas around I Will Be There
Done
  • "The title track was written by Ogie Alcasid and also featured the song "Flexin"" — the title track featured another song in it? It sounds like a peculiar thing...
Reworded and split into two sentences
  • "her fifth studio album Beautiful" — comma after album
Done
  • "worked with some new writers" — omit some as unnecessary and vague
Done
  • "album Private Affair. The" — comma after album
Done
  • "A remake of the Bee Gees' "How Deep Is Your Love" was the second single." — I find the wording rather awkward...
Reworded
  • Ref abbreviation needs to be explained in table
Added

Hope this helps :) Pamzeis (talk) 09:40, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for your review Pamzeis! I have addressed the above. Let me know if I missed anything. Thanks! --Pseud 14 (talk) 13:39, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Support from NØ

The list seems to meet the FL criteria and the detailed notes that are included here clarify any possible doubts in my opinion. I support it for promotion and just have these comments:

  • The lead addresses the song as "I'm In To You" and the table says "I'm Into You". I imagine the table is correct here.
Thanks for catching this. The title on the table is correct. I have updated the lead.
  • "The album also featured the song "Flexin", which was a collaboration" - Not sure "which was" is necessary.
Revised
  • "Kyla's next two records—Heartfelt (2007) and Heart 2 Heart (2008)—were cover albums" - I'm always iffy about "records" as a descriptor, maybe "releases" instead?
Changed
  • The abbreviation "PARI" does not need to be included as it is not used again.
Removed abbreviation
  • Maybe include the release year for "How Deep Is Your Love" in a bracket
I'm assuming the release year for the remake, which has been added now.
  • "One of its tracks, "My Heart", was written by Brian McKnight for Kyla's wedding to basketball player Rich Alvarez in 2011, and was later re-recorded as a duet." - A duet with McKnight? This could be made more clear.--NØ 10:10, 31 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Added

Thank you very much for your support and additional review MaranoFan. I have addressed the points listed above. Let me know if there's anything I may have missed. --Pseud 14 (talk) 13:54, 31 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

  • Source review – The reliability and formatting of the sources look okay, and no dead links were detected by the link-checker tool. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:16, 2 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
  • Image review – All photos used in the article have appropriate free licenses, as well as alt text. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:25, 6 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
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