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The list was promoted by Giants2008 via FACBot (talk) 00:26, 30 August 2021 (UTC) [1].[reply]

Michael Jackson videography

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Nominator(s): TheWikiholic (talk) 18:09, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Nominating this for the featured list because I think it has greatly improved from its previous failed nomination. The page was copy-edited by a member of the Guild of Copy Editors. I've also fixed the other issues pointed out during the previous reviews. I hope to fix the remaining issues the way I recently did with this successful nomination. Looking for comments and suggestions. Warmest Regards...— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:09, 23 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Resolved comments from RunningTiger123 (talk) 02:41, 30 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
;Comments
  • "in 1990; ." – assuming this is a typo; is there a clause that needs to be added there?
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 03:11, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Tables need captions at the top using either |+ your caption or |+ {{sronly|your caption}}
plus Added.— TheWikiholic (talk) 05:46, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Move the code for each of the images to the start of the relevant decade instead of listing them all at once. Otherwise, on mobile devices, there will be a long list of images before the tables, and the tables and images won't match up like they do on desktop.
RunningTiger123 take a look now, please.— TheWikiholic (talk) 05:46, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Rowspans for the years 1989 and 1997 need to be fixed
 Done.— TheWikiholic (talk) 05:46, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Descriptions for video albums are incomplete sentences and therefore shouldn't have periods
 Done.— TheWikiholic (talk) 05:46, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Bullets for album details for Video Greatest Hits – HIStory appear broken
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 05:46, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Production of Stark Raving Dad → Production of "Stark Raving Dad"
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 03:11, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sources 127–130 should use "Last, First" instead of "First Last" for authors' names to match the other citations.
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 03:11, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • This isn't a source review, but after a quick scan I think source 9 should be improved (connecting the patent to the video is a bit too much
    OR). Also, I'm not sure how it got there, but source 18
    should be fixed...
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 03:11, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

— RunningTiger123 (talk) 23:00, 26 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Everything from earlier looks good; just two more quick fixes I noticed.

  • In the lead, use Michael Jackson's Ghosts instead of "Michael Jackson's Ghosts".
 Done.— TheWikiholic (talk) 17:35, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Last row in video albums table is still an incomplete sentence with a period

— RunningTiger123 (talk) 16:17, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Done.— TheWikiholic (talk) 17:35, 27 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Support – RunningTiger123 (talk) 02:41, 30 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Comments
  • "It featured Macaulay Culkin, Tess Harper, and George Wendt and Jackson" - the two "and"s read a bit oddly here
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The singer's first music video as a solo artist, shows" - no reason for that comma
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "It was filmed on the 800 Stage stage" - Stage stage?
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Darryl wants to prove to his friends private school has not changed him" => "Darryl wants to prove to his friends that private school has not changed him"
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Image captions that are complete sentences, like "Paula Abdul appears in the "Liberian Girl" video", need full stops. Those that are not complete sentences don't.
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "reporting on the his eccentric behavior" - there's a stray word in there
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
ChrisTheDude take a look now, please.— TheWikiholic (talk) 18:47, 28 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from Giants2008 (Talk) 21:19, 28 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Source review – A few issues could stand to be worked out:
  • The publisher of ref 18 is listed as EW. If this is Entertainment Weekly magazine, the publisher should probably be spelled out and italicized.
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 11:48, 25 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • What makes Rap Dose (ref 99) a reliable source?
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 11:48, 25 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • What makes Documentary Heaven (ref 113) reliable?
 Fixed.— TheWikiholic (talk) 11:48, 25 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Giants2008 I'm not seeing any suspicious or dead links there. Please let me know if you think any one of these sources needs an urgent replacement. Thanks.— TheWikiholic (talk) 02:24, 28 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

My concerns have all been addressed. The source review has been passed. Giants2008 (Talk) 21:19, 28 August 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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