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Nani filmography
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This is my fourth attempt at a featured list. It is the filmography of the Indian actor
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The Rambling Man (talk) 13:28, 20 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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Thanks for the comments,
]- Comments from Aoba47
- I would rephrase "besides making appearances in a few Tamil language films" to "and makes appearances in a few Tamil language films" as I find the "besides" sentence construction to be unnecessary in this context.
- Please clearly identify the years in which the films are released in this phrase (Nani played the lead roles in three Telugu films in the next two years: Ride, Snehituda... and Bheemili Kabaddi Jattu.).
- In the phrase "a simple housefly", I think you can remove "simple" as it sounds odd in this context.
- Please add the year in which Yevade Subramanyam was released in the lead. Same comment applies to Bhale Bhale Magadivoy.
- I think you need to rephrase this part (It was the actor's first major success,) as this actor appears to have been successful in the past, as you identify in the first paragraph of the lead. I would add context to this to further explain this part as I was a little confused when I read it (the article identifies it as "blockbuster success"). I just find "major success" to be very unclear.
- I would use the actual title of the award for "Filmfare Critics Award for Best Actor – South" in the sentence as the renaming of it to "Critics award for the best actor in Telugu cinema" borders on POV issues. It is better to go with the award's official title.
- In this sentence (The commercial success of his subsequent releases Krishna Gaadi Veera Prema Gaadha and Gentleman helped him gain stardom in Telugu cinema.), identify the years in which the films were released.
Great work with this list. Everything looks good. Once my comments are addressed, I will support this. Aoba47 (talk) 15:11, 25 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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- Thank you for addressing my comments. I support this. Aoba47 (talk) 14:01, 26 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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- "makes appearances in a few Tamil language films" => "appears in".
- "collaborated with B. V. Nandini Reddy for" - as far as I know one collaborates with someone on something.
- "The following year, Nani collaborated with S. S. Rajamouli and Gautham Menon for" - same as above.
- "His next release was Nag Ashwin's Yevade Subramanyam (2015)" - at this point it is hard to tell if he acted in it or produced it.
- I count four instances commercial success in the lead. An alternative for this can be profitable.
- Ref formatting and reliability are fine. – FrB.TG (talk) 08:06, 28 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support on every criterion except 3b as I am not sure. In any case, well done. – FrB.TG (talk) 10:24, 29 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]
- Comments from Skr15081997
- Firstpost is a website so it need not be italicized.
- The text is pretty solid.
- That's it from me. --Skr15081997 (talk) 11:52, 5 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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- Support Excellent work on this one. --Skr15081997 (talk) 03:22, 6 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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- Closing note: This WP:FLC/ar, and leave the {{featured list candidates}} template in place on the talk page until the bot goes through. Giants2008 (Talk) 22:03, 6 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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