Wikipedia:Good article reassessment/Eddie Bayers/1

Eddie Bayers

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Result: delist due to a

ping me when replying 14:14, 11 September 2022 (UTC)[reply

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This one seems to fail

WP:WIAGA

points:

Well written:
- Several instances where terms aren't linked, such as "Bach, Beethoven, and Mozart". Terms like "after a short time" are not quantified.
- Also no clear inclusion for the "selected discography" part. Why these albums and not others? Why is one a keyboard credit? Also concerns about
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  AllMusic.
Broad in coverage:
- There is very little biographical info about him. His DOB is unsourced, and his city of birth is not verified in the body of the article. Also, the "session work" segment gives very little detail on session work, speeding through a laundry list nearly five decades long in less than a paragraph.
- As a musician, there should also be information on his style. What is his drumming like stylistically? What types of drums, cymbals, etc. does he use?
- He is mentioned as recording on Universal South in the infobox, but this is not verified in the body.

Ten Pound Hammer • ⁽What did I screw up now?) 05:05, 12 May 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pinging @J04n: @Jackedano: Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 21:09, 9 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Re-pinging @J04n: and @Jackedano:. Ten Pound Hammer • ^{(What did I screw up now?)} 21:37, 6 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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