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Darjeeling

A town is the eastern lower

There are a few red links that will be taken care of in 3 to 4 days. A major reference article is no more available online, but is available in the Internet Archive. Please help building up the article, especially sections like History, Culture etc. Also the article needs copyedit. Regarding the map in the infobox, the common India locator map will be used after the issue regarding the map style (that is being discussed now in relevant pages) is fixed. Regards.--Dwaipayan (talk) 02:42, 11 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

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Review by thunderboltz^{a.k.a.Deepu Joseph |TALK}

1. Darjeeling is famous for its tea industry, which produces blends considered among the world's finest. (similar expression comes again in Economy) Considered by whom? POV.
2. Geographical corodinates may be added.
3. Mount Kanchenjunga at 8,591 m (28,185 feet) the world's third tallest peak, is clearly visible from Darjeeling, and in clear days, Mount Everest (8,848 m) is also visible. — consider rewording to make it relavent to Darjeeling?
4. There is inconsistency in the area noted in the infobox and the government and politics section.
5. Unlike many other Indian cities, Darjeeling does not have its own police commissioner The lead says Darjeeling is a town, not a city.
6. The women make a notable contribution as earning members of the family, which is higher than the national average Is the contribution of women higher than the national average? Might need rewording.
7. Jorebungalow, Devil Dance, Maghe sankranti, Raj Bhawan, Planter's Club, — wikilink
8. Schools attracting students from all over India and South Asia should go with a citation.
9. traditions that are a part of any public school — wikilink to the traditions of public schools.
10. that attract students who have completed their 12th standard exam from all over the region. — might be hard for non Indian readers to grasp. -- thunderboltz^{a.k.a.Deepu Joseph |TALK}16:18, 14 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]