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List of songs recorded by Basshunter
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List wil be nominated to FLC in the future. It passed GOCE in 2018. Eurohunter (talk) 20:05, 25 March 2023 (UTC)
Comments from Esculenta
- Hi, I'm investigating using GPT-4 for ChatGPT-assisted article reviews. After feeding the lede of this article for analysis (haven't figured out tables yet), I asked it:
- "This is the lede of a Wikipedia list article titled "List of songs recorded by Basshunter". Do you see any improvements that could be made to improve the prose?"
- "The lead of the "List of songs recorded by Basshunter" article is quite detailed, but there are a few suggestions for improving the prose and structure:
- Break down the long paragraphs into shorter ones, grouping information by relevant topics, such as collaborations, albums, and singles.
Comment: Information is already grouped by albums and singles. Previously the paragraphs were too short, so currently they are quite longer, and I think they are okay, Eurohunter (talk) 08:28, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
- Clarify and simplify some sentences to make them more concise and easier to read.
- Comment: Below. Eurohunter (talk) 08:28, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
- Here's a revised version of the lead:"
- Break down the long paragraphs into shorter ones, grouping information by relevant topics, such as collaborations, albums, and singles.
"Basshunter is a Swedish singer, record producer, and DJ who has recorded five studio albums and two compilation albums, totaling over 90 songs.[a] His first album, The Bassmachine, was released online on 25 August 2004.[2][3] In 2006, he signed with Extensive Music[4] and Warner Music Sweden.[5] His albums, The Old Shit and The Bassmachine, were made available on his website in 2006.[6]
Basshunter's debut studio album, LOL, was released on 28 August 2006,[7] featuring singles "Vi sitter i Ventrilo och spelar DotA" and "Vifta med händerna," where he collaborated with Patrik & Lillen. He also worked with PJ Harmony on the songs "Utan stjärnorna,"[b] "Var är jag,"[c] and "Festfolk [2006 Remix]."[d][8] In 2007, he collaborated with DJ Mental Theo's Bazzheadz on "Now You're Gone." In 2008, he released a cover version of "Please Don't Go" and "All I Ever Wanted,"[9] followed by his second studio album, Now You're Gone, on 14 July.[10]
- Comment: Singles "Vi sitter i Ventrilo och spelar DotA" and "Vifta med händerna" were released after LOL album release. Eurohunter (talk) 08:28, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
The album Now You're Gone featured production work by Scott Simons and Robert Uhlmann on most of the songs, with Simons also contributing to the writing of "Dream Girl" and "In Her Eyes." The deluxe edition of the album, released in 2009, included a bonus single, "Walk on Water."[11] Francis Hill co-wrote "Bass Creator" and "Camilla." Covers for "Angel in the Night" and "I Miss You" were later released.[9] Basshunter continued to collaborate with Simons on "Every Morning" and "I Promised Myself," the first single from Bass Generation, released on 28 September 2009.[12]
- Comment: It will take me a while to adjust and mix it with current version. Eurohunter (talk) 08:28, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
He worked with Hill on "I Still Love" and Uhlmann on "Plane to Spain" and "Day & Night." Hill and Simons co-wrote "Can You," while Simons also contributed to "I Can't Deny" and "Numbers." Simons and Basshunter wrote and produced "On Our Side."[13] The Early Bedroom Sessions, a compilation album, was released on 3 December 2012, featuring songs from The Old Shit and The Bassmachine. "Go Down Now" was released as a single, and "Angel in the Night" was a promotional single. Other tracks included "Wacco Will Kick Your Ass" and four unreleased songs.[14]"
- Comment: I think it looks cool, but isn't the term "work" too general in comparison to "production" or "writing"? Eurohunter (talk) 08:28, 9 April 2023 (UTC)
- I have no personal opinion about validity or worth of these chatbot suggestions; let me know if they were useful for improving the article.
- @Esculenta: Your comments have been noted, and issues has been addressed. I think these chatbot suggestions are quite good and worth a try. They are definitely to consider now or in the future occasion. Could you explain something more about the process of use GPT-4 for ChatGPT? Can I try it myself somehow? Thank you. Eurohunter (talk) 08:28, 9 April 2023 (UTC)