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Mega Man Battle Network 5

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I've listed this article for peer review because there have been significant edits since its last edit nearly a year ago; in particular, the edits done were the ones listed on its to-do list (more development info, and removal of the uncited/unnecessary character section). Other minor edits mainly relate to adding more citations, and replacing outdated citation links (thanks, GameSpot).

Thanks, Shadowboxer2005 (talk) 06:13, 22 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

@Shadowboxer2005: I have taken a quick skim of the article, and here are some thoughts on how to improve it:

• Every paragraph needs a citation at the end of it (except the Story section, per
  MOS:PLOT
  it doesn't need citations)
• Move the reception template to the top of the reception section to save white space.
• The reception section should state what reviewers liked about the game, and why they gave different scores to the GBA and DS versions.
• Ref 20 title should not be in all caps per
  MOS:ALLCAPS

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 23:11, 2 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Shadowboxer2005: to ensure that they saw the above comments. Z1720 (talk) 17:50, 25 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I did see it; I was just working on other things. Shadowboxer2005 (talk) 08:59, 26 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]