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Tom Thomson

Hi,

I've requested a peer review on the article for the Canadian artist Tom Thomson. I have been spending the past few months editing using my own personal library and have greatly expanded the page from Start-class to where it is now. With that said I realize it's getting a bit too long, and so I'm wondering about areas that I could cut back and potentially start sub-topics (more discussion regarding this is on the talk page). I'm also looking for comments about the general style and format of the article, given that it is essentially my first real attempt at writing a "good" article by myself. I have basically based the format on the page for Vincent van Gogh (which is a FA) figuring that I'll eventually hope to get this article to that point. Let me know what you think!

Thanks, Tkbrett (✉) 21:08, 18 August 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Comments by Catrìona
  • Hello
    talk) 18:47, 3 September 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Thank you for the response,
WP:BUNDLING wasn't specific, so I've left them as is). Excited to proceed ahead! (This would be my first GA or FA!) Tkbrett (✉) 04:15, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply
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Yes, three is the usual limit for in a row citations - I should have been more explicit. I'm sorry I can't help more with the content of the article. Good luck!
talk) 05:09, 5 September 2018 (UTC)[reply
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