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Tupou VI

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I've listed this article for peer review because I want to make this article better before the GA review happens.

Thanks, History6042 (talk) 00:55, 1 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Davest3r08

• Royal Central is unreliable per
  WP:RSP
  , citations to it on the article should be replaced with more reliable sources.
• Try running InternetArchiveBot on the article.
• Per
  MOS:LEADCITE
  , citations should not be in the lead as it summarizes the article.

Thanks

User:Davest3r08. History6042 (talk) 17:34, 1 January 2024 (UTC)[reply

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I changed the citation to Royal Central and took the citations out of the lead. Using InternetArchiveBot did nothing. History6042 (talk) 17:49, 1 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

talk) 20:46, 1 January 2024 (UTC)[reply

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I'd also recommend that you expand the article, as most of its sections are one paragraph long, a violation of

talk) 20:50, 1 January 2024 (UTC)[reply

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Where is it still cited? History6042 (talk) 21:14, 1 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]

talk) 00:26, 2 January 2024 (UTC)[reply

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OK History6042 (talk) 01:45, 2 January 2024 (UTC)[reply]