Wikipedia:Scientific peer review/Invasive species

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Invasive species

Does this article meet the scientific understanding of invasive species? It seems to be extensively cited with plenty of examples. Cheers! Wassupwestcoast 05:23, 29 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Automated Peer Review

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    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 13:24, 29 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comments on work done

  • All citations now in-line and meta. Cheers! Wassupwestcoast 22:09, 30 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  • Place non-breaking space where appropriate
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2nd Automated Peer Review

The following suggestions were generated by a semi-automatic javascript program, and might not be applicable for the article in question.

  • Consider adding more
    [?]
  • There may be an applicable
    [?]
    (Note that there might not be an applicable infobox; remember that these suggestions are not generated manually)
  • Per
    [?]
  • Per
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  • This article may need to undergo
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  • There are a few occurrences of
    WP:AWT
    . Certain phrases should specify exactly who supports, considers, believes, etc., such a view.
    • it has been
    • might be weasel words, and should be provided with proper
      [?]
  • Watch for
    redundancy exercises
    .)
    • Vague terms of size often are unnecessary and redundant - “some”, “a variety/number/majority of”, “several”, “a few”, “many”, “any”, and “all”. For example, “All pigs are pink, so we thought of a number of ways to turn them green.”
  • As done in
    [?]
  • Please ensure that the article has gone through a thorough copyediting so that it exemplifies some of
    [?]

You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Davnel03 12:15, 1 August 2007 (UTC)[reply]