User contributions for 128.197.70.15

20 May 2008

• 15:1915:19, 20 May 2008 diff hist −138‎ Talk:History of the iPhone ‎ →‎No Cash payments
• 15:1715:17, 20 May 2008 diff hist +671‎ History of the iPhone ‎ →‎Price drop controversy: please state reasons for NPOV in the discussion, new NYT reference. Other page editors please comment in the discussion regarding this issue
• 15:1015:10, 20 May 2008 diff hist +879‎ Talk:History of the iPhone ‎ →‎No Cash payments

16 May 2008

• 16:4016:40, 16 May 2008 diff hist +12‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎ →‎Plot
• 16:2716:27, 16 May 2008 diff hist −5,872‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎ →‎Plot: This is a summary, as per Wikipedia guidelines of 400-700 words.
• 16:2116:21, 16 May 2008 diff hist 0‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎
  Undid revision 212859413 by 128.197.70.15 (talk
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• 16:2016:20, 16 May 2008 diff hist 0‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎No edit summary
• 16:1716:17, 16 May 2008 diff hist 0‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎No edit summary
• 16:1716:17, 16 May 2008 diff hist −5,546‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎ This is not a shot-for-shot retelling, its a plot SUMMARY. Also, numerous spelling and grammatical errors were contained.
• 14:4714:47, 16 May 2008 diff hist +662‎ Talk:History of the iPhone ‎ →‎No Cash payments: new section
• 14:4514:45, 16 May 2008 diff hist +391‎ User talk:KelleyCook ‎No edit summary
• 14:3214:32, 16 May 2008 diff hist +299‎ User talk:KelleyCook ‎ →‎History of iPhone
• 14:2314:23, 16 May 2008 diff hist +537‎ User talk:KelleyCook ‎ →‎History of iPhone
• 14:1914:19, 16 May 2008 diff hist +431‎ History of the iPhone ‎ →‎Price drop controversy: Price is not mentioned in the main iPhone article, only in this article. This is a neutral, relevant fact to the product. Please see additional references.

14 May 2008

• 14:4514:45, 14 May 2008 diff hist −2,320‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎No edit summary
• 14:4414:44, 14 May 2008 diff hist −5,670‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎ →‎Plot: greatly reduced. Its a plot summary, not a scene-for-scene retelling

12 May 2008

• 19:5419:54, 12 May 2008 diff hist +137‎ User talk:KelleyCook ‎ →‎History of iPhone
• 19:4919:49, 12 May 2008 diff hist +290‎ User talk:KelleyCook ‎No edit summary
• 19:4719:47, 12 May 2008 diff hist +419‎ History of the iPhone ‎ →‎U.S. release: tried to alter wording, not an irrelevant point of interest
• 19:4219:42, 12 May 2008 diff hist +411‎ History of the iPhone ‎
  Undid revision 211928404 by KelleyCook (talk
  ) Not irrelevant, change the wording if you think its POV
• 18:2818:28, 12 May 2008 diff hist +411‎ History of the iPhone ‎ →‎U.S. release: no cash payments allowed

8 May 2008

• 15:5715:57, 8 May 2008 diff hist −32‎ Starbucks ‎ →‎Staffing: grammatical and structural edits
• 15:5515:55, 8 May 2008 diff hist −501‎ Starbucks ‎ →‎Staffing: Dress code not relevant, most companies have dress codes.

6 May 2008

• 19:5019:50, 6 May 2008 diff hist −48‎ Larry Lucchino ‎ →‎Guest Appearances
• 19:4419:44, 6 May 2008 diff hist +10‎ Talk:Starbucks ‎ →‎Competitors Section

2 May 2008

• 19:5619:56, 2 May 2008 diff hist −182‎ Starbucks ‎
  Undid revision 209558553 by SameOldSameOld (talk
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30 April 2008

• 15:4615:46, 30 April 2008 diff hist +280‎ Starbucks ‎ →‎Staffing: benefits and coffee-master edits

24 April 2008

• 15:4815:48, 24 April 2008 diff hist −351‎ Talk:Starbucks ‎ →‎Biased: Thanks for playing

17 April 2008

• 16:0016:00, 17 April 2008 diff hist +86‎ Starbucks ‎ →‎History: management chronology clarifications
• 15:5615:56, 17 April 2008 diff hist +533‎ Talk:Starbucks ‎ →‎Clear error regarding CEO History

16 April 2008

• 19:4819:48, 16 April 2008 diff hist +27‎ Tom's of Maine ‎No edit summary
• 19:4419:44, 16 April 2008 diff hist −96‎ Aquafina ‎ Yes, the label states "Bottled at the Source P.W.S" - public water supply
• 19:4119:41, 16 April 2008 diff hist −246‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎ →‎Factual inaccuracies: the Red Line issue makes sense, though trivial - Jill could have been at her parents house, etc., can't assume residence(s) without knowing her background
• 15:1515:15, 16 April 2008 diff hist +519‎ Talk:Starbucks ‎ →‎POV pushing: company reports, etc

15 April 2008

• 15:0215:02, 15 April 2008 diff hist −113‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎ →‎Factual inaccuracies
• 14:5914:59, 15 April 2008 diff hist −1‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎ →‎Controversy
• 14:5614:56, 15 April 2008 diff hist −27‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎ removed expansion tag, the plot is sufficient, as well as all this extra trivia

14 April 2008

• 19:2519:25, 14 April 2008 diff hist −650‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎ →‎Plot: clean-up, plot is not a scene-by-scene description.

10 April 2008

• 19:2019:20, 10 April 2008 diff hist −207‎ 21 (2008 film) ‎ →‎Production: unnecessary description of filming locations
• 15:5915:59, 10 April 2008 diff hist −3‎ Starbucks ‎ →‎Products: clean-up and some basic edits

1 April 2008

• 15:5515:55, 1 April 2008 diff hist −5‎ Jason Alexander ‎ birth date is July 23, not September
• 14:4314:43, 1 April 2008 diff hist +95‎ Boston University School of Law ‎ →‎Notable alumni: Ambassador Richard Graber

26 March 2008

• 18:1218:12, 26 March 2008 diff hist +303‎ Starbucks ‎ →‎Labor disputes: Massachusetts tip lawsuit developing

25 March 2008

• 18:5418:54, 25 March 2008 diff hist +59‎ Starbucks ‎ →‎History: cleanup

21 March 2008

• 20:1720:17, 21 March 2008 diff hist +72‎ Talk:Tucker Max ‎ film in pre-production

14 March 2008

• 18:1818:18, 14 March 2008 diff hist +14‎ Heidi Fleiss ‎ cleanup request

12 March 2008

• 18:5318:53, 12 March 2008 diff hist −34‎ Copley Place ‎ →‎Restaurants
• 18:5318:53, 12 March 2008 diff hist +97‎ Copley Place ‎ →‎Luxury Retailers
• 18:4918:49, 12 March 2008 diff hist +38‎ Copley Place ‎ →‎Restaurants
• 14:2314:23, 12 March 2008 diff hist −27‎ Sean Lennon ‎ he's an American songwriter, no text indicates he ever stepped foot in the UK