User contributions for 135.180.193.96

20 June 2023

• 17:4317:43, 20 June 2023 diff hist −8‎ Drop shipping ‎ →‎In China
• 17:4217:42, 20 June 2023 diff hist +3‎ Drop shipping ‎ →‎In China: grammar

15 June 2023

• 19:3319:33, 15 June 2023 diff hist +10‎ Sodom and Gomorrah ‎ →‎Biblical narrative

5 June 2023

• 01:0101:01, 5 June 2023 diff hist +173‎ Uvalde school shooting ‎ →‎Account by Pedro Arredondo

4 June 2023

• 16:2716:27, 4 June 2023 diff hist +612‎ Talk:Martial law in the United States ‎ →‎The subject is never defined, and examples do not elucidate: new section Tag: New topic

6 May 2023

• 00:0700:07, 6 May 2023 diff hist +25‎ Action 14f13 ‎ Fixed dangling modifier in 2nd sentence

5 May 2023

• 21:1621:16, 5 May 2023 diff hist +363‎ Mohsen Fakhrizadeh ‎ →‎Ambush attack: Cleaned up incoherent sentence ordering

20 February 2023

• 04:5604:56, 20 February 2023 diff hist +431‎ Talk:Columbine High School massacre ‎ →‎Verb Error: new section Tag: New topic

19 February 2023

• 23:4023:40, 19 February 2023 diff hist −7‎ Divinity: Original Sin II ‎ →‎Gameplay: Grammar cleanups

14 February 2023

• 23:3823:38, 14 February 2023 diff hist +1,478‎ Talk:Industrial Revolution ‎ →‎Grammar/Syntax Issue in Causes: new section Tag: New topic

12 February 2023

• 22:0122:01, 12 February 2023 diff hist +419‎ Talk:Helen Keller ‎ →‎Grammar problems: new section Tag: New topic

9 February 2023

• 20:4620:46, 9 February 2023 diff hist −243‎ America's Got Talent: The Champions ‎ →‎Format: Fixed non-parallel comparisons, wordiness, awkward phrasings
• 20:1420:14, 9 February 2023 diff hist −3‎ Shin Lim ‎ →‎Personal life
• 20:1420:14, 9 February 2023 diff hist −5‎ Shin Lim ‎ →‎Personal life: Fixed awkward phrasing
• 20:0520:05, 9 February 2023 diff hist +20‎ Shin Lim ‎ Removed awkward relative clause

25 January 2023

• 21:3421:34, 25 January 2023 diff hist +240‎ Talk:Shooting of Abby Zwerner ‎ →‎Wikipedia is not a newspaper
• 21:3121:31, 25 January 2023 diff hist +532‎ Talk:Shooting of Abby Zwerner ‎ →‎New info: teacher texted someone about lax administration: new section Tag: New topic

15 January 2023

• 19:3519:35, 15 January 2023 diff hist +232‎ Talk:Paddy Jackson ‎ →‎How on earth is one of the most important Irish trials in recent memory condensed into this?: new section Tag: New topic

13 December 2022

• 16:4316:43, 13 December 2022 diff hist +201‎ Talk:Tenet (film) ‎ →‎What on earth is a Hitchcockian double?: new section Tag: New topic

2 August 2022

• 01:3001:30, 2 August 2022 diff hist +510‎ Talk:Patrick Rothfuss ‎ →‎Criticism/Fan Backlash: new section Tag: New topic

1 August 2022

• 17:0017:00, 1 August 2022 diff hist +6‎ 1973–1975 recession ‎No edit summary

14 July 2022

• 02:4602:46, 14 July 2022 diff hist +338‎ Uvalde school shooting ‎ →‎Account by Pedro Arredondo
• 02:2202:22, 14 July 2022 diff hist −2‎ Uvalde school shooting ‎ →‎Account by Pedro Arredondo: Fixed misplaced modifiers