User contributions for 184.153.71.193

8 May 2022

• 00:0400:04, 8 May 2022 diff hist −14‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Early life and education: attend is more apt than enroll
• 00:0200:02, 8 May 2022 diff hist +3‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Early life and education: Jane did not graduate from Stanford in 1996-- unless she skipped high school. Reference is yet again, another Jane Kim.

29 June 2021

• 15:3015:30, 29 June 2021 diff hist +112‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Other elections: Added election data-- these are numbers based on Department of Elections data. This is not promotional. Tag: Reverted

28 June 2021

• 18:5718:57, 28 June 2021 diff hist +83‎ Jane Kim ‎ Added actual vote count and percentages of other candidates running
• 18:5418:54, 28 June 2021 diff hist −2‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Other elections: eliminated ]]
• 18:5418:54, 28 June 2021 diff hist −47‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Other elections: grammatical clean up
• 18:5318:53, 28 June 2021 diff hist +85‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Other elections: Added actual vote count to Mayor's race.

1 June 2021

• 23:5123:51, 1 June 2021 diff hist −3‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Pledge of Allegiance: grammatical change. "Was" to "were"
• 23:5023:50, 1 June 2021 diff hist −167‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎San Francisco Board of Education: Kim did not get endorsement of Democratic Party for either of her Board of Education race or her first Board of Supervisors race. Simplistic to say this is why she lost her first race.
• 23:4723:47, 1 June 2021 diff hist −176‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Career
• 23:4523:45, 1 June 2021 diff hist −504‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Career Tag: references removed
• 23:4423:44, 1 June 2021 diff hist −16‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Early life and education

30 May 2021

• 06:1306:13, 30 May 2021 diff hist 0‎ Jane Kim ‎ just switched wording for smoother transition- did not remove any words.
• 06:1206:12, 30 May 2021 diff hist +30‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Pledge of Allegiance
• 06:0906:09, 30 May 2021 diff hist +10‎ Jane Kim ‎ Article did not use word "homosexual" but LGBT, replaced in this version and reflected full quote which included communities of color, immigrants and women. Changed "refused" with did not, "refusal" with silence and removed "finally" which editorializes a biased position on Pledge of Allegiance versus neutral description of occurence..
• 05:5505:55, 30 May 2021 diff hist +330‎ Jane Kim ‎ Replaced a sentence to be more true to the source which it was attributed to. Changed "refused" which creates a bias to a more neutral "did not" Tag: possible unreferenced addition to BLP

15 April 2021

• 23:4923:49, 15 April 2021 diff hist −838‎ Jane Kim ‎ →‎Early life and education: Repetitive— already has its own section below. Not part of “Early life and education.” Tags: references removed Mobile edit Mobile web edit