User contributions for 2001:630:53:26:3035:D7FD:D5B0:4A05

11 December 2014

• 15:0915:09, 11 December 2014 diff hist −46‎ Dimetcote ‎ grammar, style...
• 14:0014:00, 11 December 2014 diff hist +11‎ Aparigraha ‎ it's a noun, not a verb
• 13:5913:59, 11 December 2014 diff hist +1‎ Aparigraha ‎ fix phrasing. it's not the concept of something being a concept.
• 13:2113:21, 11 December 2014 diff hist −12‎ Anne Murray ‎ →‎In popular culture: her name is not "prominent" in the song -- it occurs only once (hardly worth a mention here, you'd think)
• 13:1713:17, 11 December 2014 diff hist 0‎ T and O map ‎ →‎History and description: bad hyphen

3 December 2014

• 16:0116:01, 3 December 2014 diff hist +2‎ Salvatore Testa ‎ more commas
• 16:0016:00, 3 December 2014 diff hist −1‎ Salvatore Testa ‎ →‎Encounter with Enrico Riccobene: grammar: "the sight...was too much", not "sight were"
• 15:5915:59, 3 December 2014 diff hist +1‎ Salvatore Testa ‎ →‎Italian Market shooting: comma reqd
• 15:5115:51, 3 December 2014 diff hist +1‎ Disappearance of John Favara ‎ →‎Portrayal in popular media: comma
• 15:4915:49, 3 December 2014 diff hist +1‎ John Gotti ‎ →‎Taking over the Gambino family: spcae
• 15:4215:42, 3 December 2014 diff hist +2‎ WakeMate ‎ commas (less breathless!) and a typo
• 15:1315:13, 3 December 2014 diff hist 0‎ Frank De Lima ‎ hyphen
• 15:0815:08, 3 December 2014 diff hist +9‎ Bruderschaft ‎ fix punctuation; also it's their "second release, which did not materialize" -- the comma is vital, else it would mean their first didn't materialize either.
• 15:0015:00, 3 December 2014 diff hist −148‎ Module file ‎ →‎Scene: trim some fairly bad English
• 14:5814:58, 3 December 2014 diff hist +1‎ Peter Hajba ‎ comma reqd
• 14:5714:57, 3 December 2014 diff hist +4‎ Peter Hajba ‎ requires article
• 14:5514:55, 3 December 2014 diff hist −1‎ Iris (American band) ‎ →‎History: bad comma
• 14:2814:28, 3 December 2014 diff hist +2‎ Infinite loop ‎ →‎Infinite recursion: grammar
• 14:2614:26, 3 December 2014 diff hist +2‎ Infinite loop ‎ →‎Alderson loop: a loop isn't a word. "loop" is a word. also: this is very rare -- only in Jargon File? almost never used even by programmers.
• 14:2514:25, 3 December 2014 diff hist −220‎ Infinite loop ‎ →‎Examples: we don't need a DO...LOOP example for BASIC, since we already have a GOTO example, and later BASICs still support GOTO. No stack issues; see talk page.
• 14:2514:25, 3 December 2014 diff hist +324‎ Talk:Infinite loop ‎ →‎The example in BASIC: I think you are wrong -- here is why
• 14:0014:00, 3 December 2014 diff hist 0‎ Kill Your Darlings (2013 film) ‎ bad comma
• 13:5513:55, 3 December 2014 diff hist −1‎ Ghost riding ‎ bad comma
• 13:5213:52, 3 December 2014 diff hist +4‎ Keak da Sneak ‎ must repeat "he" since we are no longer talking about the 16-year-old
• 13:5113:51, 3 December 2014 diff hist −1‎ Ghost riding ‎ bad comma

4 June 2014

• 12:4312:43, 4 June 2014 diff hist −31‎ John Lydon ‎ →‎Jesus Christ Superstar 2014

2 June 2014

• 15:0915:09, 2 June 2014 diff hist +495‎ User talk:Gareth Griffith-Jones ‎ →‎Holmesian etc.: new section
• 15:0715:07, 2 June 2014 diff hist −33‎ Capitalization ‎ →‎Adjectives: ''Holmesian'' and ''Pecksniffian'' are *overwhelmingly* written with initial capital: see Google Books. do not revert without checking this please.
• 15:0615:06, 2 June 2014 diff hist +279‎ Talk:Watch Dogs (video game) ‎ →‎Gibberish sentence: new section
• 14:4514:45, 2 June 2014 diff hist −2‎ Luca Pacioli ‎ typos, grammar etc.

8 May 2014

• 12:1712:17, 8 May 2014 diff hist −17‎ Capitalization ‎ →‎Adjectives: ''Holmesian'' and ''Pecksniffian'' are *overwhelmingly* written with initial capital: see Google Books. so poor examplse.
• 12:0112:01, 8 May 2014 diff hist −1‎ Voiced palatal lateral approximant ‎ bad comma

2 May 2014

• 15:2015:20, 2 May 2014 diff hist +1‎ Owsley Stanley ‎ →‎Post-Grateful Dead career: grammar: they are not *both* naturalised citizens
• 14:3014:30, 2 May 2014 diff hist −1‎ Complementizer ‎ →‎Hebrew: virtually nobody spells "coexist" with the diaeresis. pedantic/archaic. removing.
• 13:5013:50, 2 May 2014 diff hist +8‎ Bachelor griller ‎ citation needed for claim of no trademark: I note capitals "Bachelor Griller" in all Google Books matchse
• 13:2113:21, 2 May 2014 diff hist +16‎ Gender symbol ‎ →‎LGBT culture: this "neutrois" symbol seems to be an Internet thing, not in general use
• 13:1813:18, 2 May 2014 diff hist 0‎ The Hydrogen Sonata ‎ →‎Plot: grammar: "both to do X and to do Y"