User contributions for Def Dynamo
A user with 29 edits. Account created on 15 September 2019.
18 May 2024
- 19:4219:42, 18 May 2024 diff hist 0 m Sichuanese dialects Corrected the language referred to. current Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
3 October 2023
- 18:3818:38, 3 October 2023 diff hist 0 m Slime Mori Mori Dragon Quest 3 Minor spelling/punctuation errors Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
2 August 2023
- 04:2904:29, 2 August 2023 diff hist +44 m Nielsen Media Research →Criticism of ratings systems: Added request for citation. The edited paragraph, the last in the section, somewhat reads like advertising and certainly does not belong in the "criticisms" section. Tag: Visual edit
10 June 2023
- 21:1621:16, 10 June 2023 diff hist +25 m Kung fu (term) Corrected a language error - a Mandarin phrase was presented as being "Chinese". Chinese is a language family, not a single language. (China's government actively attempts to suppress ethnic/linguistic minorities in part by presenting Mandarin as THE language of China, so it is particularly important to correct these errors when we find them) Tag: Visual edit
8 March 2023
- 08:1408:14, 8 March 2023 diff hist −124 Bill Laswell Removed unsourced/misattributed, potentially false quote (quote is featured heavily in the Assassin's Creed video games, but I am uncertain of the original source). Quote was shoehorned in section for sole purpose of making an ill-fitting opinionated observation. Tag: Visual edit
28 February 2023
- 01:4701:47, 28 February 2023 diff hist +117 m Old Man's Journey Multiple grammar mistakes, missing words, and poor wording. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
17 December 2022
- 01:1801:18, 17 December 2022 diff hist +38 James Kochalka Marked needed citation for alleged interview with "The Onion", implied source of the section's information. (Note: "The Onion" is purely satire, and never has serious interviews, so is almost certainly not the source. However, interview would've happened when "The Onion" was printed with "The A.V. Club" in the same publication. "The A.V. Club" was created as a supplemental - but non-satirical - publication. As such, it is likely that if said interview exists, it was in "The A.V. Club" instead.) Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
7 November 2022
- 02:1302:13, 7 November 2022 diff hist +16 m Vegemite Clarified unattributed values (percentage was given, but not what the percentage was for - aka "percentage of what?"). Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
12 August 2022
- 18:4818:48, 12 August 2022 diff hist +37 m Welch, West Virginia →History: Indicated the need for a citation Tag: Visual edit
11 July 2022
- 02:4202:42, 11 July 2022 diff hist +8 Chut languages Did a quick internet translation of a source in Vketnamese. The source was improperly formatted, linking to nothing and referenced by nothing, so I used the best templates I could find to tag out, sorry if they aren't the proper ones, it's a weird case that I couldn't find a specific template for. A better translation is likely needed, among other things. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
11 June 2022
- 21:5721:57, 11 June 2022 diff hist +67 Kenta Kobayashi Expanded upon the "pioneered maneuvers" bit to include a notable/relevant bit of info on the Busaiku Knee Kick Tag: Visual edit
- 21:4621:46, 11 June 2022 diff hist +52 Susan G. Komen for the Cure →Legal battles over trademarking: Corrected/updated outdated percentage figures, clarified wording thereof Tag: Visual edit
9 April 2022
- 20:4120:41, 9 April 2022 diff hist +47 m Netcode →Netcode types: Corrected an imprecise claim regarding the length of frames in milliseconds. Tag: Visual edit
15 February 2022
- 00:0100:01, 15 February 2022 diff hist +6 m Smallpox →Post-eradication: Corrected an error in word use; it was used as if it had a different definition. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
14 February 2022
- 02:0002:00, 14 February 2022 diff hist 0 m CJ Wallis →Feature Films: Replaced an inaccurate release date with the most up-to-date available. Tag: 2017 wikitext editor
23 January 2022
- 20:1320:13, 23 January 2022 diff hist −38 m PUBG: Battlegrounds →Design: Fixed major grammar errors and improved wording/readability of a sentence or two.
18 November 2021
- 22:4622:46, 18 November 2021 diff hist +28 m Gerry Bednob Fixed grammar error
11 November 2021
- 21:1721:17, 11 November 2021 diff hist +31 m Quark (dairy product) →Production: Fixed a minor grammar error, improved wording
4 November 2021
- 19:5619:56, 4 November 2021 diff hist +2 How Heavy Are the Dumbbells You Lift? →Volume list: Corrected a transliteration error - "チェスト" was written as "Chesu", ignoring the "ト"("to") character, instead of "Chesuto" (チェ="che", ス="su", ト="to")
27 October 2021
- 21:5921:59, 27 October 2021 diff hist +262 m Phillipe Cunningham →Career: Clarified wording, provided more accurate info on boundaries Tag: possible unreferenced addition to BLP
20 October 2021
- 22:5922:59, 20 October 2021 diff hist −25 m List of current monarchs of sovereign states →Key: Made it visually align with the table better, simplified repetitive headers
- 07:3307:33, 20 October 2021 diff hist −16 Economy of North Korea →Food shortages: Made some wording more objective, removed two sentences that were unsubstantiated, along with the accompanying citation which did not source the material whatsoever, and was even borderline contradictory. Replaced pruned sentences with relevant info from linked "main article" at top of section. Tag: Visual edit: Switched
19 April 2021
- 23:0123:01, 19 April 2021 diff hist −96 m The Expanse (novel series) →Adaptations: Fixed grammatical errors/confusing wording, removed a sentence that belonged under the "Reception" section instead Tag: Visual edit
8 April 2020
- 00:4500:45, 8 April 2020 diff hist +32 m Count palatine →Holy Roman Empire: Changed confusing wording Tag: Visual edit
11 January 2020
- 23:5023:50, 11 January 2020 diff hist +27 m Interval (music) →Main intervals: Added a widely recognizable shorthand too established to justify omission. Added familiar, prominent names, widespread enough to be functional alternatives Tag: Visual edit
7 November 2019
- 03:3703:37, 7 November 2019 diff hist +3 m Vinegar tasters Used more accurate wording. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 03:3603:36, 7 November 2019 diff hist +3 m Vinegar tasters Used more accurate wording. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
22 September 2019
- 20:0020:00, 22 September 2019 diff hist +6 m Westvleteren Brewery Improved wording of my previous edit Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
- 19:5119:51, 22 September 2019 diff hist +184 m Westvleteren Brewery Specified country of sale, improved wording. Tags: Visual edit Mobile edit Mobile web edit
