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16:1316:13, 29 April 2024 diff hist +250‎ Talk:Climate change ‎ →‎Discussion: Adding to my comment arguing against livestock production sentence.

22:4822:48, 25 April 2024 diff hist +1,307‎ Talk:Sustainable energy ‎ →‎Readability improvements for the lead?: Reply Tag: Reply
22:2422:24, 25 April 2024 diff hist +336‎ User talk:Efbrazil ‎ →‎Why don't you like the readability script?: Reply Tag: Reply
19:0419:04, 25 April 2024 diff hist +278‎ Talk:Climate change ‎ →‎Discussion: Reply Tag: Reply
18:5918:59, 25 April 2024 diff hist +749‎ Talk:Sustainable energy ‎ →‎Readability improvements for the lead?: Reply Tag: Reply
18:4718:47, 25 April 2024 diff hist +37‎ Sustainable energy ‎ Modifying sentence on "R&D required" as I think it is vague and will cause paralysis in reader's minds, particularly as we have no wikilink for the topic. Changing sentence to make it clear that pathways are not blocked by R&D miracles. This is also a good opportunity to raise the issue of carbon offsets, which is not otherwise in the lead.

19:2019:20, 24 April 2024 diff hist +523‎ Talk:Climate change ‎ →‎Discussion: Reply Tag: Reply
17:5017:50, 24 April 2024 diff hist +92‎ Talk:Climate change ‎ →‎Discussion
17:3517:35, 24 April 2024 diff hist +979‎ Talk:Climate change ‎ →‎Discussion: Reply Tag: Reply
17:0317:03, 24 April 2024 diff hist +38‎ Sustainable energy ‎ I added a wikilink from the sentence on "technology development needed" to go to Environmental effects of aviation, as that's one area I am aware of. We do not seem to call this issue out much in the article, and I wanted to give readers a place to go if they want to understand what is meant by the statement. Tag: Reverted
16:4516:45, 24 April 2024 diff hist +83‎ Talk:Sustainable energy ‎ →‎Readability improvements for the lead?
16:4016:40, 24 April 2024 diff hist +62‎ Talk:Sustainable energy ‎ →‎Readability improvements for the lead?
16:3916:39, 24 April 2024 diff hist +1,288‎ Talk:Sustainable energy ‎ →‎Readability improvements for the lead?: Reply Tag: Reply
16:3916:39, 24 April 2024 diff hist −69‎ Sustainable energy ‎No edit summary
16:1016:10, 24 April 2024 diff hist +6‎ Sustainable energy ‎ Thought the sentence on nuclear issues had gotten awkward, so partly backed out changes there.

17:5617:56, 22 April 2024 diff hist +327‎ Talk:Sustainable energy ‎ →‎Readability improvements for the lead?: Reply Tag: Reply
17:4917:49, 22 April 2024 diff hist +1,110‎ Talk:Climate change ‎ →‎Discussion: Reply Tag: Reply
17:3117:31, 22 April 2024 diff hist −101‎ Sustainable energy ‎ Tightening up last sentence of lead. Arguably hydro has more negative impact than biomass. Not worth mentioning either in first paragraph though.
17:2017:20, 22 April 2024 diff hist −163‎ Sustainable energy ‎ Tightened up last paragraph of the lead
17:0217:02, 22 April 2024 diff hist −317‎ Sustainable energy ‎ Tightening up pathways paragraph of the lead
16:3916:39, 22 April 2024 diff hist −244‎ Sustainable energy ‎ Tightening up third paragraph of lead.
16:0716:07, 22 April 2024 diff hist −25‎ Sustainable energy ‎ Tightening up wording

17:2617:26, 20 April 2024 diff hist +43‎ Greenhouse effect ‎ Added wiki link current
17:2217:22, 20 April 2024 diff hist −3‎ Greenhouse gas ‎ average temperature rises was bad grammar. fixed.
17:2017:20, 20 April 2024 diff hist −11‎ Greenhouse gas ‎ "for example" in the middle of a sentence is bad grammar. Fix was to change mention from examples to more inclusive categories. We don't need to get into specific GGE sources in the lead of this article.

20:2820:28, 19 April 2024 diff hist −47‎ Talk:Climate change ‎ →‎Survey: Clarification of what I said
19:4419:44, 19 April 2024 diff hist +192‎ Climate change ‎ →‎Global temperature rise: I cut mention of temperatures prior to human evolution, as I think they are arguably irrelevant. Instead, I added detail to the last ice age, include sea levels and warming rates. That period is much more relevant to modern climate change.
16:4016:40, 19 April 2024 diff hist −156‎ Talk:Climate change ‎ →‎Survey: Adding signature
16:3216:32, 19 April 2024 diff hist +263‎ Talk:Climate change ‎ →‎Survey
16:2516:25, 19 April 2024 diff hist +211‎ Talk:Climate change ‎ →‎Survey