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21 June 2024
- 07:5907:59, 21 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Heat stroke Better adjective. current
- 05:5605:56, 21 June 2024 diff hist +1 m June Allyson No edit summary current
- 05:5305:53, 21 June 2024 diff hist +4 m List of films about bands →List of motion pictures about music bands (real or fictional): Link added. current
- 05:5205:52, 21 June 2024 diff hist +5 m Mayhem (band) Adjective misused as preposition. current
- 05:4705:47, 21 June 2024 diff hist −20 m List of films about bands →List of motion pictures about music bands (real or fictional)
- 05:4605:46, 21 June 2024 diff hist −4 m List of films about bands →List of motion pictures about music bands (real or fictional): 1990s "era"? How's that?
- 05:4205:42, 21 June 2024 diff hist +2 m List of films about bands →List of motion pictures about music bands (real or fictional)
- 05:4105:41, 21 June 2024 diff hist +1 m List of films about bands →List of motion pictures about music bands (real or fictional): Link added; repetitive link removed.
- 05:2305:23, 21 June 2024 diff hist −7 m Where the Boys Are →Music: Prose improved. current
- 05:1205:12, 21 June 2024 diff hist 0 m La Bamba (film) →Plot: By convention, seasons' names aren't capitalized. current
- 05:1205:12, 21 June 2024 diff hist 0 m La Bamba (film) →Plot: Better adjective.
- 05:0705:07, 21 June 2024 diff hist +23 This Is Spinal Tap Added point.
20 June 2024
- 18:5418:54, 20 June 2024 diff hist −9 m Berlin (band) →Dissolution and re-formation: Adjective misused as preposition. current
- 18:5118:51, 20 June 2024 diff hist −6 m Berlin (band) →Eventual success: No need to repeat given name.
- 18:5018:50, 20 June 2024 diff hist −3 m Berlin (band) →Early years: Prose improved.
- 16:4416:44, 20 June 2024 diff hist +9 m Mitragyna speciosa →Recreational uses: Prepositional object corrected. current
- 16:4116:41, 20 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Mitragyna speciosa →Traditional use: More fitting word for laborers.
19 June 2024
- 18:3718:37, 19 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Varicose veins No edit summary
- 18:3718:37, 19 June 2024 diff hist +244 Varicose veins Text simplified and precisified; citation added; another citation lacking. Mayo source declares varicose veins “for many people, … simply a cosmetic concern”; NIH source mentions itching and nighttime leg cramps as symptoms, ulcers as complication.
- 17:5817:58, 19 June 2024 diff hist +6 m Varices Clarification. current
- 17:5817:58, 19 June 2024 diff hist −6 m Anorectal varices Prose improved; "[a]norectal varices are the dilation" is imprecise.
- 17:4417:44, 19 June 2024 diff hist +2 m Anorectal varices →Diagnosis: Prose improved (e.g., adjective misused as preposotion corrected).
- 07:1307:13, 19 June 2024 diff hist +4 m List of military tactics →Eight classic maneuvers of warfare: Prose corrected. current
- 06:3506:35, 19 June 2024 diff hist +2 m Wing walking →Early development: “[P]ossibly watching someone die” is inelegant prose. Also, another fact here wants a source.
- 06:2306:23, 19 June 2024 diff hist +967 User talk:DocWatson42 →Image you cut from WP article: Reply Tag: Reply
- 04:1504:15, 19 June 2024 diff hist +1 m The Skywayman →Production current
16 June 2024
- 06:3006:30, 16 June 2024 diff hist +319 User talk:DocWatson42 →Image you cut from WP article: Reply Tag: Reply
15 June 2024
- 05:3105:31, 15 June 2024 diff hist −1 m Nordic walking →History current
- 05:2805:28, 15 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Cane gun Ditto.
- 05:2705:27, 15 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Cane gun Compound adjective,
- 04:4604:46, 15 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Walking stick →American "walking canes"
- 04:4504:45, 15 June 2024 diff hist −14 m Walking stick →American "walking canes": Prose simplified.
- 04:4304:43, 15 June 2024 diff hist +4 m Walking stick →Ziegenhainer: Link added.
- 04:4104:41, 15 June 2024 diff hist +537 User talk:DocWatson42 →Image you cut from WP article: Reply Tag: Reply
- 03:4403:44, 15 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Jack Driscoll (character) No edit summary current
14 June 2024
- 18:3118:31, 14 June 2024 diff hist +602 User talk:DocWatson42 →Image you cut from WP article: Reply Tag: Reply
- 08:0308:03, 14 June 2024 diff hist +2,275 User talk:DocWatson42 Admonition.
- 04:4104:41, 14 June 2024 diff hist +31 m Voyageurs The engagés were indentured, as the passage goes on to note. Countable (as against mass) nouns deserve the pronoun "few" and its variants. current
- 03:2203:22, 14 June 2024 diff hist −104 Voyageurs Overlong, perhaps overstated, and anyway underreferenced description cut down. (That a grueling trade whose workers “never made enough money to consider early retirement” would be coveted for its promised wealth is doubtful on its face.)
- 03:0303:03, 14 June 2024 diff hist −17 m Chicago Portage →Early peoples current
- 03:0303:03, 14 June 2024 diff hist 0 m Chicago Portage →Created by a glacier: By convention, seasons' names aren't capitalized.
13 June 2024
- 07:0307:03, 13 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Talc →Safety: Paragraph was rather too long.
- 07:0207:02, 13 June 2024 diff hist +2,477 Talc →Safety: Further research described and cited; section restructured somewhat for clearer contrast in viewpoint; empty inline link excised.
- 04:4104:41, 13 June 2024 diff hist +1 m Household chemicals No edit summary current
- 04:3704:37, 13 June 2024 diff hist +52 H. L. Mencken →Early life and education: Sentence augmented a bit; besides, it was a marriage of five years, not five years of marriage. current
- 03:4903:49, 13 June 2024 diff hist +5 m Simple harmonic motion Adjective misused as preposition. current
12 June 2024
- 04:3804:38, 12 June 2024 diff hist +6 m Harris's hawk The common name is properly Harris’s hawk (even though a document cited here, from the Oregon zoo, shortens the name to Harris hawk). current
- 04:2704:27, 12 June 2024 diff hist +2 m Harris's hawk No edit summary
11 June 2024
- 20:0320:03, 11 June 2024 diff hist +7 m EPDM rubber Internal link added; formal grammar touched up. current
- 16:1816:18, 11 June 2024 diff hist −9 m Pfister (firm) Unnecessary adverb. current