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Hi, I am Caitlyn23 and I would like to request, as a declared COI editor, an addition to the Cybersecurity vulnerabilities sub-section. Please update the section at the end of the last paragraph with the following addition: "In March 2021, the Federal Communications Commission designated a group of companies, including Dahua, as posing “an unacceptable risk to U.S. national security. Some news sources have called this risk into question arguing, as The Intercept explains, that “the U.S. government has not provided the public with any evidence that Dahua and Hikvision are spying on customers.”^[1]

Thank you kindly for your help. Caitlyn23 (talk) 18:52, 22 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Yitz (talk) 04:54, 14 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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If you simply need to ask for help in making an edit, please change the template to {{help me}}. I am working to expand the article with additional informative content. Because of my COI, I am not editing the page myself. I would appreciate review and implementation of the following suggested additions:

• Add a new section after "History" entitled "Market" including the following sentences: Dahua Technology has been listed on the Shenzhen Stock Exchange since its IPO in 2008.^[1] The company is a component of multiple indices, including SZSE Component Index, SZSE Composite Index, and SZSE 300 Index. In 2017, Dahua Technology was named in Forbes Asia's Fab 50.^[2][3] In May 2022, Singer Sri Lanka PLC opened the first Dahua Concept Store.^[4]
• Add a new section after "Market" entitled "Partnerships" with the following sentences: In 2016, Dahua partnered with Dell to build smart security systems.^[3] In 2017, Dahua partnered with Beijing University of Posts and Telecommunications (BUPT) to build a joint intelligent video laboratory.^[5] Beginning in late 2019, Dahua began to partner with the Vatican Museum, providing security and full implementation over five years.^[6]

Of course, I'd be happy to hear any feedback or suggestions. Thank you, Caitlyn23 (talk) 17:07, 27 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Caitlyn23 sounds good to me, added. Thank you for properly formatting it. Rlink2 (talk) 21:00, 8 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Rlink2, thank you very much for your help in implementing these additions. I am putting together some additional suggestions to continue improving the article, and hope we can continue to collaborate. Thanks again! Caitlyn23 (talk) 17:14, 9 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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If you simply need to ask for help in making an edit, please change the template to {{help me}}. In a continued effort to improve the article, I'd like to suggest the following additions and changes to the content:

• In History, add the following two sentences at the end of the section: In June 2020, Dahua was presented with the Commissioner's certification mark from the United Kingdom's Biometrics and Surveillance Camera Commissioner.
  perimeter intrusion detection in a survey conducted by Asmag.com.^[2][3]

I appreciate your assistance in completing these edits and enhancing the encyclopedic value of the article, as my COI prevents me from doing so myself. Rlink2, I am grateful for your help with my prior edit request. Would you have a look and implement if all looks good? Happy to hear any feedback you may have. Thanks, Caitlyn23 (talk) 23:25, 10 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Caitlyn23: They all look good to me (made some minor adjustments to account for flow and Wikipedia standards). Thank you for your assistance and proper formatting. Rlink2 (talk) 23:26, 17 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks so much for you quick and positive response. It is a pleasure working with you. Caitlyn23 (talk) 19:04, 18 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hi again Rlink2. I just noticed that although you said you implemented the entire edit request, you must have inadvertently left out the last bullet point above. I am reposting it below for your convenience:

• Remove the subsection entitled "Security Industry Association expulsion" and move its contents into History, above the last sentence which begins "In November 2021...," ensuring the article remains in line with
  WP:STRUCTURE
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Thanks again. Caitlyn23 (talk) 01:06, 7 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi, as I continue to work on expanding the article and improving its structure, I am suggesting the following additions and changes:
* At the end of the Partnerships section, add the following sentence: The Schwarze Berge Wildlife Park in Rosengarten, Germany, uses Dahua camera systems to provide security.[1]

•  Not done: As far as I can tell, this isn't a partnership, this is just someone buying things from them as a customer. ℰmi1y_⧼T·C⧽ 19:42, 21 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

* An edit from my previous request which was inadvertently left out: Remove the subsection entitled "Security Industry Association expulsion" and move its contents into History, above the sentence which begins "In November 2021...," ensuring the article remains in line with 
WP:STRUCTURE
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•  Already done ℰmi1y_⧼T·C⧽ 19:42, 21 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

I appreciate your assistance. Thank you, Caitlyn23 (talk) 21:33, 19 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

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An edit was recently made to the infobox of the article, adding "state-owned enterprise" to the Type parameter. Similarly, the first line of the lead describes Dahua as "a partially state-owned publicly-traded company." Although some state-owned companies do hold shares in Dahua (a public company), that does not make Dahua a "state-owned enterprise" or a "partially state-owned" company by any definition (see this document from the IMF, specifically the first footnote, for how a SOE is defined). I am requesting assistance from the community to remove these terms in the infobox and the lead, as I am not editing myself due to my COI. Thank you, Caitlyn23 (talk) 00:34, 24 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Caitlyn23 Ok, I removed it, especially since there seem to be no sources confirming it is a "state owned enterprise". Rlink2 (talk) 00:01, 1 December 2022 (UTC)[reply]