Talk:Typhoon Wutip (2019): Difference between revisions

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Nominator: JCMLuis (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 21:08, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I will complete this review within one week. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:08, 26 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Good Article review progress box WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

1. Well-written

• Per
  MOS:ALLCAPS
  , the references with all-caps titles (ref. 6 and the first two words in ref. 40 and 61) should be changed
• ...however, post-season analysis determined that it had attain winds of 270 km/h... change "attain" to "attained"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• ...Wutip did not held this intensity for long... change "held" to "hold"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• Cloud tops warmed up as the eye was becoming cloud-filled. change "was becoming" to "became"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• Upon completion the next day, the eyewall thickened and its associated convection... add a comma after "thickened"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• Wutip was most powerful typhoon in the month of February on record,... add "the" before "most"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• Residents of Satawal, Lamotrek, Elato, Faraulep, and Piig necessitated water assistance, as their drinking source were soon to be exhausted.
• Overall, Wutip caused heavy preliminary damage in infrastructure and agriculture that costed at least $2 million. change "costed" to "cost"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• Wutip dumped 43 cm (17 in) of rain in Inarajan, 30 cm (12 in) in Dandan, and 15 to 20 cm (6 to 8 in) elsewhere in the island. change "in the island" to "on the island"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• No injury or serious damage were reported... change the sentence to "No injuries or serious damages were reported"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• No injuries were reported and public roadways across the islands remained clear of debris. add a comma after "reported"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• ...with the support of the International Organization for Migration (IOM) and Red Cross. add "the" before "Red Cross"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• Elimo later revised his declaration on March 2, emphasizing the extensive damages Wutip had caused towards infrastructure, food crops, and water sources. change "towards" to "to"

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

2. Verifiable

• Earwig's Copyvio check shows some close paraphrasing from ref. 40 that should be changed.

  An executive order was issued for Chuuk State to activate their command post on February 20–21, before reports of fallen trees, flooding, and damaged homes came through. Displaced people near the shorelines were evacuated to typhoon shelters. Both sentences should be reworded.

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• Dead links: 3 (change to |url-status=dead)

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• The |url= parameter in ref. 49 needs to be changed to this URL. The current link takes you to a search page.

•  Done luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

• Spot check: 1, 4, 6, 9, 19, 34, 37, 43, 45, 54, 59, 65

3. Broad
The article covers all major aspects and is focused.

4. Neutral
The article is neutral.

5. Stable
This article is stable day-to-day.

6. Illustrated
The images in the article are in the public domain and have relevant captions.

@JCMLuis: I've completed the review. Let me know when you've made the suggested changes. -Riley1012 (talk) 15:43, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Riley1012: I have addressed all but one concern which you seemed to have forgot to add a suggestion to. luis 💬 16:22, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@JCMLuis: Sorry for that mistake. The sentence should say "drinking sources" instead of "drinking source" -Riley1012 (talk) 16:30, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

 Done luis 💬 16:32, 28 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]