Talk:2019 Northern Ireland Open

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Good article2019 Northern Ireland Open has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic star2019 Northern Ireland Open is part of the 2019–20 snooker season series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
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July 13, 2021Good article nomineeListed
October 13, 2022Good topic candidatePromoted
Did You Know
A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on July 13, 2021.
The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Mark Selby took more time over a single shot at the 2019 Northern Ireland Open, than the fastest ever maximum break?
Current status: Good article

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Desertarun (talk) 08:35, 7 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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5x expanded by Lee Vilenski (talk). Self-nominated at 16:18, 4 July 2021 (UTC).[reply]

  • interesting hook, article is expanded nicely, it's in decent shape, no obvious signs of copyvio. QPQ looks okay too. This is good to go. Although I would say just two things: (a) not sure the comma before "than" is required, and the source says it was 53 seconds longer than Ronnie's 147, not quite a "full minute". That is all, otherwise very suitable. The Rambling Man (Stay alert! Control the virus! Save lives!!!!) 15:33, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

  1. ^ "Snooker news - Mark Selby takes six minutes and 13 seconds to take shot". Eurosport UK. Retrieved 4 July 2021.

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 17:14, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 17:14, 5 July 2021 (UTC)[reply
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Lead

  • "11 to 17 November 2019 in the Waterfront Hall in Belfast, Northern Ireland." - at the Waterfront Hall,
  • "it was the sixth ranking event of the 2019–20 snooker season and the second event of the Home Nations Series." - repetition of "event"
  • "The event featured a prize fund of £405,000, with £70,000 being awarded to the winner. The event was broadcast on Eurosport and Quest domestically. The event was sponsored by betting company 19.com." - try not to have consecutive sentences start exactly the same
  • "compiling a maximum break in the first round match with Lu Ning, the sixth of his career." - in which frame did Bingham compile his maximum break?
  • "the sixth of his career." - needs to be mentioned in the prose at the correct place

Format

  • "The Northern Ireland Open was first played in 2016 Northern Ireland Open," - avoid writing text like this
  • "The 2019 event was the second of four Home Nations Series events," - needs verifying with a reliable source
  • "The 2019 event was the second of four Home Nations Series events, and the sixth world ranking event of the 2019–20 snooker season." - too much repetition of "event"
  • "Chinese sports prediction website 19.com sponsored the event[9] which" - comma missing between the word "event" and the citation
  • You can add fuller details of who broadcast the tournament in other countries and terrorites

Tournament summary

  • "Defending champion Trump defeated James Cahill in the opening round, then defeated three Chinese players Zhang Anda, Si Jiahui and Yan Bingtao, whilst unseeded player Anthony Hamilton defeated Tom Ford, Rod Lawler and eighth seed Kyren Wilson to reach the quarter-finals." - too many uses of the word "defeated"
  • "Fourteenth seed Joe Perry defeated Zhao Xintong, Ross Bulman, Graeme Dott and Robbie Williams to play Alexander Ursenbacher in the quarter-finals, who defeated Xiao Guodong and Martin O'Donnell in the opening two rounds" - same issue as above
  • "Fourteenth seed Joe Perry defeated Zhao Xintong, Ross Bulman, Graeme Dott and Robbie Williams to play Alexander Ursenbacher in the quarter-finals, who defeated Xiao Guodong and Martin O'Donnell in the opening two rounds." - needs verification by a reliable source
  • "In the third round, he met Stuart Bingham, who made the highest break of the event, a maximum break of 147 in his opening round win over Lu Ning." - in which frame did Bingham make his maximum break?
  • "Seventh seed Shaun Murphy defeated Fraser Patrick, Luo Honghao, Ricky Walden and Barry Hawkins to meet Ronnie O'Sullivan, who defeated" - repetition of "defeated"
  • "who defeated Oliver Lines, Lei Peifan, Stuart Carrington an Yuan Sijun.[14][8]" - refs in numerical order please and text in bold is a spelling error
  • "whilst Perry defeated Ursenbacher 5–3.[15][8]" - refs in numerical order please
  • "Selby, however, took over six minutes to take a single shot," - more than
  • "more time than the fastest ever maximum break." - clarify it was O'Sullivan who made that break in 1997
  • "O'Sullivan opened won all of the first five frames," - can be either expanded by adding some missing words or shortening it by deleting the word in bold
  • "and lead 3–1 after a break of 123" - led
  • "Making his second century break of the final," - how much was the century break?
  • "After the match, Trump commented: "To defend any title is always difficult but to do it against Ronnie [O'Sullivan] is extra special...You've got to play [your best] against Ronnie otherwise you lose."[19][21]" - the Eurosport citation (the second one) does not mention Trump's quotes so it can be removed

References

  • Be consistent in how Eurosport is presented in their works and not have a mix of either Eurosport or Eurosport UK throughout
  • Same issue as above with all World Snooker sources
  • References 2, 13, 14, 16, 19 ans 22 are missing their respective publication dates
  • References 12, 15 to 17 and 22 are missing their respective authors
  • References 1 and 21 are duplicates of each other
  • References 5 and 6 are duplicates of each other
  • Reference 15 is missing the translated title and the fact the source is in German

Format

"The Northern Ireland Open was first played in 2016 Northern Ireland Open, … "?
Was this meant to be "The Northern Ireland Open was first played in 2016, … "?
Prisoner of Zenda (talk) 09:55, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Was supposed to be piped, fixed. I am currently working through the GAN above for some typo changes. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talk • contribs) 10:00, 13 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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