Talk:2020 Players Championship (snooker)

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:18, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Shall review for the

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (

   lists

   ):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (

   reliable sources): c (OR

   ):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (

   focused

   ):

4. It follows the
   neutral point of view
   policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have

   suitable captions

   ):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Image caption

• "Judd Trump won the event, his sixth championship of the season" - picture two caption has a factual error in bold

Lead

• "and the second leg of the Coral Series." - Coral Cup
  • These terms are interchangable as per [1]. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• "It was the 16th ranking title of Trump's career, and his fifth ranking title of the season." - repetition of "title"
  • done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• The above text will also need mentioning in the prose
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• "With it, he equalled the record held jointly by Stephen Hendry, Ding Junhui, Mark Selby and O'Sullivan for the most ranking titles in a single season." - needs to be mentioned in the prose with a reliable source verifying it
  • Done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
• "the highest of which was a 140 made by Neil Robertson." - in which round and which frame was the 140 break made?
  • done Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:12, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Format

• "Points scored at events from the 2019 Riga Masters until the 2020 Snooker Shoot Out added towards qualifying for the event." - were added towards qualifying for the tournament.
• "It was the 13th ranking event of the snooker season," - should be 14th
• Wikilink world rankings to the relevant article
• "with the 2020 World Grand Prix and Tour Championship." - some words missing from this text
  • Fixed all. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:14, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Prize fund

• "with £125,000 to the winner." - going to or awarded
  • fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:08, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Summary

• "Murphy led 4–1, was pegged back to 5-5" - Murphy, who led 4–1, was pegged back to 5–5
• "The quarter-finals were played between 26 and 28 February." - how about from 26 to 28 February.
• "World number one Trump defeated Higgins 6–3," - no mention of Trump being world number one in the Sporting Life source verifying this information
• Wikilink break to the relevant article for non-snooker readers only on the first mention
• "Maguire won the match in frame 11, his second 6–5 win of the tournament." - repetition of "wo(i)n"
• "but Magurire won the next four frame." - spelling error
• "Murphy won the opening three frames," - BBC Sport says it was the first two frames
• The term session can be wikilinked to the correct article so that non-snooker readers can find out its meaning
• "Trump won the two following frames to win the match 10–4," - repetition of "wo(i)n"
  • I have covered these. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:16, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Century breaks

• "the highest of which was a 140 made by Neil Robertson." - in which match and which frame did Robertson make his 140 break
  • Added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:08, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

• The work in WPBSA sources should be either worldsnooker.com or World Snooker not a mix of both
• Same with all the Sporting Life references
• All those references missing publication dates, accessdates and authors need to be amended to include them
• Reference 8 is a duplicate of Reference 4
• Reference 23 does not linked to that of the centuries made during the 2020 Players Championship
  • Added archive. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:02, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Shall put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address or query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 17:37, 4 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I have covered these MWright96. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 15:17, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Lee Vilenski: Much of the points in the Reference section have still not been addressed; have fixed one wikilink error MWright96 (talk) 17:26, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I think I have all these now. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski ^{(talk • contribs)} 21:17, 6 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Lee Vilenski: I went ahead and added more relevant data into the references for more completeness. Aside from that, am now promoting this article to GA status MWright96 (talk) 11:58, 7 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]