Talk:Albanians in Egypt

Albanians in Egypt was nominated as a History good article, but it did not meet the good article criteria at the time (April 17, 2016). There are suggestions on the review page for improving the article. If you can improve it, please do; it may then be renominated.

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This article has been checked against the following criteria for B-class status:
Referencing and citation: criterion not met Coverage and accuracy: criterion met Structure: criterion met Grammar and style: criterion met Supporting materials: criterion met

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GA Review

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Reviewer:

talk · contribs) 21:23, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply

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I will take this review. I am sorry for how long you've had to wait. I've reviewed 60+ other articles, including some long and complex ones, and will review this article against the 6

talk) 21:23, 11 April 2016 (UTC)[reply

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Assessment

Whilst I commend the editors who have put some effort into improving this article, it is not suitable for GA status. My concerns include:

A confusing structure that focuses more on Turkish control of Egypt and specific personalitie than Armenians in general, with no real introductory statements

Incorrect statements, such as there being no more Armenians in Egypt, which contradict other articles which say there are at least 11,000 (see Albanians#Egypt)
Grammar and prose that need improving - especially paragraph structure
Lack of citations for several areas

I have rated this article "Start class" and encourage the nominator to edit it further, but it needs a fair amount of work before it is suitable for "good article" status. Yours, --

talk) 06:28, 17 April 2016 (UTC)[reply

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Two places you may want to ask for help after this are at the

talk) 06:31, 17 April 2016 (UTC)[reply

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