Talk:Appears

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Review: August 17, 2016. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:56, 15 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hey CaliforniaDreamsFan! Sorry for my long departure in the reviewing process, but I'll likely be doing a few more here and there. Since I'm not longer in the GA Cup, my reviews will just be coming in a bulleted list versus my previous section-by-section style. Here it goes:

Remove "units" after "physical sales"

"Musically, "Appears" is an dance song. It is written in third person perspective, and is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship." --> "Musically, "Appears" is an dance song written in third person perspective, and is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship."

"300,000 unit" --> "300,000 units"

I think you could connect the bottom two paragraphs in the lead

"long-time" --> "longtime"

"She stated that the song is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship. "It's about lovers..." --> "She stated that the song is about the third person watching a happy and loving relationship: "It's about lovers..."

""Appears" was released by Avex Trax on November 10, 1999 as the sixth single from the album, which was also released on the same day. " --> Source?

"2005–2006" --> "2005-06"

"criticised" --> "criticized"

"It lasted three weeks on the top 200, one of Hamasaki's lowest spanning singles in that chart." --> "It lasted three weeks on the top 200, becoming one of Hamasaki's lowest spanning singles in that chart."

Add "2000" in parentheses after Super Eurobeat Presents Ayu-ro Mix

Don't have to include "in 1999" for the "Recording" process

Use two columns for the "Personnel" section please

Too many countries in the "Digital download" section on the table; do you think this is necessary if at all?

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It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS):

It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to
reliable sources): c (OR
):

It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):

It follows the neutral point of view
policy.
Fair representation without bias:

It is stable.
No edit wars etc.:

It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
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suitable captions
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A PD image and/or quote box may help break up the text.

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

On hold to allow for changes. Good luck as always. Carbrera (talk) 03:05, 15 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Carbrera: Hi Cabrera! No its all goods, no need to explain All finished with the adjustments and editing, good luck and regards! CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 01:24, 17 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Limited edition

of 300,000?! Gosh. Limited is limited I guess, but that's a big number and they weren't all sold. Would this artist expect to sell millions of physical copies ordinarily? (For context, The KLF's last release - after a string of top 10 international hits - was limited to 1000 copies).
Also, please note that the info about being a limited edition is only in the lead. It should be in both the body and lead or neither (as this is a GA). --kingboyk (talk) 03:27, 25 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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