Talk:Azerbaijan at the 2010 Winter Olympics

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GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:29, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will look and leave some comments. MWright96 (talk) 08:29, 11 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (
    lists
    )
    :
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (
    reliable sources): c (OR
    ):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (
    focused
    )
    :
  4. It follows the
    neutral point of view
    policy
    .
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have
    suitable captions
    )
    :
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Background

  • " they have never won a medal in the Winter Olympics." - change to medalled in the Winter Olympics.
  • "Fuat Guliyev, an official, was chosen as the flag bearer for both the opening ceremony," - get rid of both since it's been established that Guliyev didn't hold the Azeri flag at the closing ceremony
  • "while Konul Nurullayera, the chef de mission performed" - need a comma between "mission" and "performed"

Alpine skiing

  • "Due to challenging weather conditions, the second run of the race was ran 'on the 25th." - on 25 February
  • "On Friday the 26th," - 26 February,
  • "and improved her time on Thursday" - the day after

That's my lot. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 07:24, 12 July 2018 (UTC)[reply]