Talk:Battle of Carthage (698)

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I've removed "Preparations for the defense were stymied due to the rivalries of the Roman commanders.", as it didn't seem to fit the context - wouldn't this indicate that the attack would be stymied, not the defence? I know nothing of the subject, I'm just trying to make this read 'more better'.

As noted, this article needs references. Also some of what is likely relatively factual (see citation need tag for example) could use rewriting in a more factual way. Not really to clear up bias so much as to present what seem to have been written as presumed facts in a more concrete way.Eoag (talk) 05:33, 30 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 10 January 2023 and 5 May 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Li12f12 (article contribs).

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