Talk:Billiards and Snooker Control Council

Billiards and Snooker Control Council has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: August 26, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 14:31, 24 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• " Mr A. H. Collins-Orme" - I don't know about British English, but in American English at least, there should be a full stop after Mr. I'm not super familiar with the pecularities of BE, though.

• Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "John Roberts Sr" - Full stop after Sr? There's full stops after Jr. and Sr. earlier in the list

• Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "a staff member at The Sportsman - italicize The Sportsman, since it's the name of a publication

• Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "The first snooker competition organised by the BA&CC was the English Amateur Championship" - What BA&CC stands for has never been directly introduced? Well actually it is, but in the next section. Move the acronym explanation up to here

• this should have been "... the Billiards Association ..." - amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "shot at the oject ball after a foul" - You mean object ball, right?

• Yes indeed. Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "Loss of Control of the Professional Game" - Control isn't a proper noun, so it shouldn't be capitalized in the heading

• Decapitalized heading. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "Leslie Driffield, a member of the BA&CC Council was present at a meeting" - Comma after Council, see
  MOS:HEADCAPS

• Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "Loss of Control of the International Amateur Game - Why are some of these words capitalized? Headings are suppose to be in sentence case, I believe

• Decapitalized heading. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "At the beginning of the 1990s, the B&SCC was struggling financially as a result of the removal of its Sports Council funding" - It's worth mentioning why the funding was cut

• I've added the little that I could find. (No suitable results found in Newspaper databases.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:08, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• "Successor Organisations" - Organisations should be lowercase

• Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Ref 26 (Shamos) needs the page number

• The Google Books pages are actually from a different book to the one that is shown at the link. (The New Illustrated Encyclopedia of Billiards, not The Complete Book of Billiards.) Reference amended. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

• Be consistent with capitalization in references. Some are in sentence case, others are in title case. Pick one and stick with it.

• Done (I think - let me know if not.) BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

That's all I've found. Placing on hold. Hog Farm _Bacon 02:06, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for taking on this review, and let me know if you notice anything further. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 08:52, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]

I've hopefully addressed your points above, Hog Farm. Let me know if anything else needs to be done. Thanks and regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 11:08, 26 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]