Talk:Birth of public radio broadcasting/GA1

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GA Review

This article has passed its GA nomination --DannyS712 (talk) 04:09, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.


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Reviewer: DannyS712 (talk · contribs) 02:08, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Review

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  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (
    lists
    )    :
  2. It is factually accurate and
    source spot-check
    .
    a (references):
    b (citations to
    reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism
    ):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the
    neutral point of view
    policy    .
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have
    suitable captions
    )    :

Overall:
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Notes

  • Some sentences have a lot of references (eg ... a live Metropolitan Opera House performance by several famous opera singers. has 6, This event is regarded as the birth of public radio broadcasting. also has 6) - are all of these needed?
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:46, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:46, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • MOS:BODY
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:46, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:46, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • This article doesn't seem to broadly cover the topic. There should be discussion of, eg, the historical significance (elaborate on This marked the beginning of what would become nearly universal wireless radio communication.), the immediate impacts, if any, etc
 Done See new section on Immediate impact --Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:23, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Discussion

I have placed this review on hold pending resolution of the issues noted above --DannyS712 (talk) 02:20, 8 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@DannyS712: I have addressed all the issues. Can you take a look at it now. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 12:26, 9 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Doug Coldwell: I took a look; I still feel that the impact isn't quite clear - what impact did it have on things other than radio broadcast? Eg History of radar#Significance covers the impact radar had on World War II and modern science. Did public radio broadcasting lead to a new method of advertising? A new tool for propaganda? More access to news? If you can add something like that it would be great; if not, I'll do a final read through and finish the review. Thoughts? --DannyS712 (talk) 06:37, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@DannyS712: Significance section added. Please take another look at it again. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 13:44, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
@Doug Coldwell: Thanks for your work; lgtm, approving DannyS712 (talk) 04:09, 15 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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