Talk:Coming Up to Breathe

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Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 03:47, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

here
for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (
    lists
    )    :
    Failing article solely because the prose (and WP:MOS issues) is not up to GA standards. Here are a few examples (these are just a few, there maybe even more)
  • Coming Up to Breathe is the fifth major label, full-length studio album from MercyMe.
  • Released in on April 25, 2006,
  • Coming Up to Breathe received almost universally positive reviews from critics
  • "Something Like You" has been compared to the sound of U2 (particularly the song "Where The Streets Have No Name"),[6] while "3:42 a.m. (Writer's Block)" has been described as 'soulful classic rock'
  1. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to
    reliable sources): c (OR
    ):
    "Background" has basically every period cited with FN#1 which makes the article look even more clumsy
  2. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  3. It follows the
    neutral point of view
    policy    .
    Fair representation without bias:
    Saying "Coming Up to Breathe received almost universally positive reviews." is being biased
  4. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
    Active users have been reverting vandalism, which was last done back in mid November 2011
  5. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have
    suitable captions
    )    :
    WP:NFCC; its rational is very very weak and does not give a suitable reasoning on why a non-free artwork gives any educational value. The second file
    completely fails WP:NFCC.
  6. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    I suggest you fixed all of these concerns, get it
    WP:PR and then re-nominate at a later date. Best, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 23:23, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply
    ]

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Reviewer: Rp0211 (talk · contribs) 18:12, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]


here
for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):
    b (
    lists
    )    :
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to
    reliable sources):
    c (OR
    ):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the
    neutral point of view
    policy    .
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have
    suitable captions
    )    :
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:


Infobox

  • For the "Recorded" section, show what year it was recorded followed by a semicolon and a list of studios where it was recorded (Ex: 2009; Studio 1, Studio 2)
  • Singles do not need to be sourced in the infobox because they have their own respective articles

Lead

  • Released on April 25, 2006... → "Released on April 25, 2006 by INO Records..."

Background

  • No issues

Composition

  • Two subsections not necessary in this context

Critical reception

  • No issues

Singles

  • An album cut from the album, "No More No Less", spent one frame on the Hot Christian Songs chart, debuting and peaking at number thirty..[31] → Get rid of extra period at end of statement

Release

  • Replace all of the "No."s with "number"

Track listing

  • No issues

Personnel

  • No issues

Charts and certifications

  • No issues

References

  • If you mention a work or publisher in a reference and it is wiki-linked, do not wiki-link it for further references
  • Only italicize publications in the "work=" parameter
  • Proofread all of these to ensure errors are not made; for a guideline to follow, use
    WP:REFERENCE


After thoroughly reviewing this article, I have decided to put the article on hold at this time. There are a few prose issues, and things mostly just need to be proofread in the references section for this article to pass. I will give you the general seven days to fix mistakes, address points I have made, and/or ask me any questions that you have. Rp0211 (talk2me) 18:35, 21 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All issues have now been addressed, so I feel confident passing this article. Congratulations and keep up the good work you are doing! Rp0211 (talk2me) 01:46, 22 June 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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