Talk:Death of Cleopatra/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Will start soon. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 17:56, 31 March 2018 (UTC)[reply]

I eagerly but patiently await your review and critique of the article. Regards, Pericles of Athens^Talk 19:15, 2 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Criteria

GA Criteria

GA Criteria:

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1.a Y

1.b Y
2
2.a Y

2.b Y

2.c Y

2.d Y (20% is highest, due to phrase similarities)
3a
3.a Y

3.b Y
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4.a Y
5
5.a Y
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6.a Y

6.b Y

No DAB links Y
No dead links Y
No missing citations Y

Prose Suggestions

Please note that all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion.

occurred on either the 10 or 12 August 30 BC in I believe the the should be removed, as 10 or 12 August makes more sense unless it is changed to 10th or 12th.
while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon are more tepid by stating it was circa 12 August. suggest while Aidan Dodson and Dyan Hitlon state it was c. 12 August.
Charmion adjusting her diademed crown before she herself fell suggest Charmion adjusting Cleopatra's diademed crown before she herself fell
@PericlesofAthens: That is all my suggestions, passing now. I apologize for taking so long. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 02:21, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Pericles' comments

@Iazyges: has the review started? I can't tell. Is there something I should do right away? I guess it's good to know that there are no dead links or missing citations. Pericles of Athens^Talk 13:50, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@PericlesofAthens: Apologies on the delays, I've been busy IRL. I'll try my best to start/finish the other reviews within the week. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 04:06, 9 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Iazyges: are you still busy? Pericles of Athens^Talk 14:42, 17 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@PericlesofAthens: Apologies for the long wait, I should have time now. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:41, 18 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]
@Iazyges: excellent! I have amended the article according to your prose suggestions. Best wishes, Pericles of Athens^Talk 02:26, 23 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]