Talk:Djibouti at the 2000 Summer Olympics

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A few minor mistakes...

1. It is reasonably well written.

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   lists

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2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

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   reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism

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   Citations are inconsistent. Some dates have different formats and some publishers are missing in some citations. Use the "External links" link in the "GA Toolbox" sidebar to find the mistakes.

    Done--Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:27, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

3. It is broad in its coverage.

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4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

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5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

   Expanded recently (Beginning on January 1).

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Comments

• Soul -> Seoul

   Done --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:27, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• Be consistent with the linking of the cities (Seoul and Barcelona).

   Done --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:32, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• "As of 2000" is kinda redundant.

   Done --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:34, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

• "She set a new record for her nation upon competing, being the youngest athlete to represent Djibouti, at the age of 16 years and 162 days.[7] She was also the first female to represent Djibouti in the Olympic games.[8] She competed in the second heat of the women's 800 metres on 22 September. She finished last in the heat of eight athletes, with a time of two minutes and 31.74 seconds." More sentence variety needed (at least don't started consecutive sentences with "She").

   Done --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:36, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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  CycloneIsaac: Fixed everything --Cameron₁₁₅₉₈ ^(Talk) 23:38, 1 January 2017 (UTC)[reply
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