edit wars, multiple edits not related to the GAN process, etc. (this excludes blatant vandalism):
Does it contain images (or other media) to illustrate (or support) the topic?
A. Images (and other media) are copyright tagged, and non-free images have
fair use rationales
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B. Images (and other media) are provided where possible and are
suitable captions
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Overall:
Pass or Fail:
Resolved comments from Tbhotch
;Images
File:Emma M Nakuina Signature 1904.svg has a CC-BY-SA-4.0 license, which is valid for the uploader's re-creation. However, it misses the copyright status for the signature itself.
Done.
Infobox
Spouse(s) Frederick William Beckley Sr. -> see {{marriage}}
Fred Beckley is the only one worth mentioning in the infobox. The other children are not noteworthy.
Lead
Too short for
WP:LEAD
Done.
If you are not going to create Hawaiian National Museum soon, remove it
Sorry, I've been encouraged to red link relevant articles in past GA and FA reviews. Unless used frivolously, it is a perfectly okay according to policy. See Wikipedia:Red link.
Early life
Kaua'ala -> Kauaʻala
Done.
Her mother Kaʻilikapuolono was -> Her mother, Kaʻilikapuolono, was
Done.
"descendant of the aliʻi lineages of Oahu associated with the Kūkaniloko Birthstones" -> It is missing something to be clear
"where the highest ranking chiefs of the islands were once born ... Kamehameha I during his conquest of the Hawaiian Islands." -> I find this line irrelevant to Nakuina
Ancestry is crucial to the identity of a Hawaiian in the 19th-century and Kamehameha I was the defining figure of the age, thus connecting Nakuina to be a descendant of a chief under the service of the conqueror king.
If you are not going to create Moses Kuaea, remove the link
Same as above.
Career
"The salary from this governmental post help her support her children" -> tense
Done.
"Hawaii's first female judge.[13][14][8][15]" -> see also
No ed is for editor. There is no accredited author for the given section about Hawaii.
Taylor, Albert Pierce (1926) -> unlink it, as repeated
Changed.
Yasutake, Rumi (2017) -> You're missing author 2
Yasutake was the only other of the journal article used. Choy and Wu are editors of the entire piece. KAVEBEAR (talk) 23:02, 2 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Categories
Order them alphanumerically
Is that a policy? I have never heard such a request.
WP:CATORDER
mentions it is not a rule, but having any particular order is helpful. The categories go: politician, politician, nobility, alumni, origin, alumni, nobility, writer, writer, writer, judge, curator, politician, politician, date, date. If you'd argue the categories are in disorder because of a semantic field-style I wouldn't mind, but the current order isn't helpful.
For what I've read, "Emma Kaili Metcalf Beckley Nakuina" is not her
WP:COMMONAME
This is the version used in Notable Women of Hawaii and American Women Historians, 1700s-1990s: A Biographical Dictionary. There is no consistent usage. Calling her simply Emma Nakuina would be wrong given the importance of her first marriage and her own maiden name. KAVEBEAR (talk) 23:07, 2 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
Giving her her full name gives the wrong impression her (almost) full name is her common name, when it's based on 1-2 sources.
What do you suggest? Don’t know what you mean by almost since Kaili is merely the shorten form of Kaʻilikapuolono. KAVEBEAR (talk) 00:57, 5 March 2019 (UTC)[reply]
I'll take it to RM instead, as I'm as divided as the sources are.