Talk:Horizon (Star Trek: Enterprise)

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I will review the article shortly.
talk) 12:40, 25 April 2013 (UTC)[reply
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  • No DAB links, no dead links
  • What makes TrekWeb.com a reliable resource? Other than that I'm OK with the sources presented.
  • Sounds good.
    talk) 16:28, 28 April 2013 (UTC)[reply
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  • Critical response was mixed, and the episode received the lowest ratings for a first-run episode of the series so far, having been viewed by 3.36 million viewers. I think you can remove the "having been" and be no worse off. Does this include season one?
  • At the direction of Starfleet, the Enterprise makes a 30 light-year detour to a planet passing between two gas planets as the gravitational forces on the planet should cause heavy volcanic activity. too many planets, I would change "two gas planets" to "two gas giants" and maybe link.
  • Travis identifies that the device would explode if they try to remove it, and it is revealed that this follows the pattern of other attacks on cargo vessels nearby I don't understand this sentence.
  • Split into two and re-worded the second half. "Travis identifies that the device would explode if they try to remove it. It is revealed that other cargo vessels nearby had tracking devices placed on them before being attacked once more". Miyagawa (talk) 13:25, 28 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • What relevance does the third paragraph bear on the plot?
  • Not a great deal, I've reduced it down to a single sentenced and merged it into the second paragraph. Miyagawa (talk) 13:25, 28 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 2 uses European dating while all the others use American.
  • That isn't actually a European date - the 19 is actually the page. The two threes are the volume and the issue (both 3). The date is given as November, 2003. Miyagawa (talk) 13:25, 28 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
  • I will re-look when these comments are responded to.
    talk) 12:44, 28 April 2013 (UTC)[reply
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