Talk:I Am Not Going to Get Up Today!

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Requested move 1 July 2017

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The result of the move request was: Page moved in accordance with the clear consensus. —usernamekiran(talk) 07:49, 8 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]



I Am NOT Going to Get Up Today! → I Am Not Going to Get Up Today! – The book cover uses ALLCAPS for "not" but we use Letter_case#Title_case. Timmyshin (talk) 01:52, 1 July 2017 (UTC)[reply
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GA Review

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Nominator: Thebiguglyalien (talk · contribs)

Reviewer: Premeditated Chaos (talk · contribs) 21:58, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

A kid's book article with philosophy. I'm in. ♠PMC(talk) 21:58, 19 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Although this article is on the shorter end, which I normally complain about, it includes all the sections I would expect for broad coverage, and they are as complete as they can be based on the sourcing.

  • In the lead I would identify Alexander as an actor, for context (and also in the body) - you can't necessarily assume people know who he is
  • No gripes about the plot summary
  • I feel like there might be a way to condense "written by Dr. Seuss. By the time Seuss began work on this book, his health had begun to fail." into a single sentence, although I won't die on the hill of trying to find it
  • Since you later mention Seuss is a pseudonym, it might be worth mentioning it in the first sentence so it doesn't come as a surprise
  • "It was the first one" - 'first one' reads a bit casually. Maybe "First work" or "First publication by Seuss in eight years"
  • You managed to integrate Socrates pretty neatly, which is fun
  • If you're trying to get this to FA level, I might suggest noting other books that Einhorn compares it to, but that's at your discretion and not GA-prohibitive
  • "the method of Kenneth Burke" this is a bit opaque if you don't know who Burke is or what his method was.
  • "its unpopularity relative to other Dr. Seuss books" - this comes from having Reception under Analysis, but right now this comes as a surprise to the reader. I realize Reception is combined with Legacy, but I think it still makes more sense to move it above Analysis
  • Any particular reason why Common Sense Media is first? It's the only non-contemporary review, while the rest are from the 80s.

All of this is really FA-level nitpicking. There's nothing here that puts the article below the GACR or is worth holding up promotion over; take these as suggestions for improvement. No concerns with CV, image use (though I wish to god we had an image of a "Pineapple Butterscotch Ding Dang Doo"), and sourcing checked out. Good work! ♠PMC(talk) 20:39, 21 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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