Talk:Jacksonville Zoo and Gardens
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Discussion about GA Status at WikiProject Zoo Talk
Feel free to join us over at Wikipedia_talk:WikiProject_Zoo#Jacksonville_zoo to join us. BeckyAnne(talk) 22:44, 1 June 2007 (UTC)
Removal of History/ Zoo Management sections
I removed the Zoo history and Zoo Management sections because they were a word for word copy from the web page. You are welcome to add the sections back, but make sure they are not copy violations, and are sourced correctly. BeckyAnne(talk) 00:01, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
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Edits
Don't know why the article has Australia as a former exhibit. Went to the zoo last week and its still there, just minus the koalas. In addition, added Birds of the Rift Valley to the East African part. Combined the two non-open gardens into one section.
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