Talk:Japanese destroyer Kuwa (1944)

Japanese destroyer Kuwa (1944) has been listed as one of the Warfare good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: November 25, 2023. (Reviewed version).

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Reviewer: Djmaschek (talk · contribs) 02:18, 19 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Initial review

I plan to GA review this article. My comments will follow. Djmaschek (talk) 02:18, 19 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Review 1

@Sturmvogel 66: Please fix the issues listed below or argue your case for not fixing. Djmaschek (talk) 02:35, 22 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

• Introduction: "Kuwa probably sank one of the American ships with torpedoes before sinking herself with the loss of about half her crew." (After reading this, I wondered if Kuwa's torpedo ran in a circle, "sinking herself". Suggest: "before being sunk herself".)  Done
• Design and description, paragraph 1, sentence 1: You and I know what IJN means. But shouldn't it say "Imperial Japanese Navy (IJN)" in the introduction?  Done
• Construction and career, paragraph 1, sentence 1: "35 May" (typo)  Done
• Construction and career, paragraph 1: "Upon her completion on 25 July 1944" (Mismatch with 15 July infobox date.)  Done
• Construction and career, paragraph 3: "10.00N 124.35W" (This is incorrect. I believe it should be 124.35E. See Ormoc Bay article.)  Done

• All but the last bullet point are fixed. The coordinates are also listed at the top of the page. Djmaschek (talk) 02:32, 23 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All done. Thanks for the review.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 10:14, 24 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Last bullet point is now done. GA class. Djmaschek (talk) 05:30, 25 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]