Talk:Just a Kiss (song)/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 14:09, 20 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from AJona1992

• According to this report, there is one
  WP:DAB
  link. Please fix.
• According to this report, there is a
  WP:DEADLINK
  , please fix.
• In the lead, why is single wikilink? Why not wikilink instead lead single?
• Wikilink
  beats per minute
• File:Lady Antebellum Just a Kiss.ogg needs a "further reasoning" rational. Look at File:Amor Prohibido.ogg and File:Rolling in Deep.ogg for an example.
• In the "Music and lyrics" please wikilink Billboard and delink the one in "Chart performance" and "Music video"
• "on the chart dated May 21, 2011." - needs to be rewritten ---> ""Just a Kiss" debuted on the US Billboard Hot Country Songs chart at number 28 on May 21, 2011"
• the couple farewell each other. - this sentence is missing a word
• "on April 2011" are you sure that sounds right?
• whole song on the tenth season of US reality television show American Idol. - is missing a word
• TV Guide Canada needs to be in italics
• This source (currently FN#31) does not verify that the song received any certification from RIAA.
• FN#5 "[CD album]" ---> "[CD]", also delink United States
• FN#12 wikilink
  About.com
• FN#13 wikilink Billboard like the way you did it to FN#27
• FN#23 "Billboard Music Awards: Britney Spears joins Rihanna, Beyonce runs the world, Cee Lo spins in Space" ---> "Billboard Music Awards: Britney Spears joins Rihanna, Beyonce runs the world, Cee Lo spins in Space"
• FN#28, FN#29, FN#30, FN#40 be consistent in weather or not you wikilink works and publishers all the time or only once.
• FN#50 italic TV Guide Canada
• FN#68 be consistent in the way you retrieve dates.
• What makes this a
  reliable source
  ?

I will take care of this. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 14:11, 20 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Alright :-) Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 14:12, 20 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Fixed issues. As for the RIAA link, we have to enter the artist and song manually. Amazon.com is being used to show that the single received a CD single, nothing else.

talk) 04:14, 23 December 2011 (UTC)[reply

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Everything has been fixed. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 15:16, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

@Novice7 Amazon.com is clearly not a WP:RS at all. You don't need a retail to verify its existence, rather, the artwork, Billboard peak positions, certifications and music reviews can do that. Once this source can be fixed, I'll pass the article. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 16:07, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

• Amazon can be used for release dates. RIAA cannot be fixed. You have to search for it by adding the artist's name and the song. Jivesh1205 (Talk) 16:19, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

• According to RIAA, the certifications for "Just a Kiss" are for digital sales, please represent them as such. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 16:28, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

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talk) 16:30, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply

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I haven't removed the Amazon ref, yet, I can if you want me to.

talk) 16:31, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply

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According to this you need to add "digital" to the certification template, also the "Certifications" does not follow Template:Certification Table Entry. Yes, remove all instances of Amazon as per this discussion with User:Jezhotwells. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 16:38, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I haven't used the certification template on the article. Removed Amazon.com ref. Thanks for reviewing the article :)

talk) 16:42, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply

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Well it will only work if you do use it. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 16:44, 27 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

It's been seven (7) days since I put this article on hold and the only issue remained was about the certifications. Since I did notified Novice7 and Jivesh that if issues are not resolved I would have to fail the article. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 03:04, 28 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I did make the necessary fixes on December 23. The only remaining issue was the certification template issue, which I would've fixed today morning (I live in a different time zone). I have nominated the article again.

talk) 04:26, 28 December 2011 (UTC)[reply

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