Talk:Kinder der Landstrasse
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Rewrite required
The article needs a rewrite ideally by someone who is both familiar with the subject and reasonably fluent in English. At present, the article looks like it has been summarily "google-translated" from German, and as a consequence is much lacking in clarity. --Rocknrollsuicide (talk) 02:56, 18 October 2015 (UTC)
- I totally agree. "As a professionally-welfare justification generic psychiatric reports, which let the "Fund" the full control over his wards." is not really a sentence, and it makes no sense to me. The rest of that section is nearly as obscure. Chris the speller yack 19:11, 21 January 2016 (UTC)
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Josef Jörgerstraße?
I cannot find any mention of a "Josef Jörgerstraße" in any web-searchable WP:RS, including in a Google Books search. Nor do any of the other Wikipedia language editions. Does anyone have a reliable source for any of the sentence mentioning him?
Until then, I'm removing that sentence. — The Anome (talk) 18:09, 4 September 2023 (UTC)
- Update: WP:RS. (See de:Josef Jörger, and, for example, https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/full/10.1177/08969205231185675) Presumably appending "straße" to the name was someone's idea of humour. Or a machine translation error. Or something. Fixed. — The Anome (talk) 18:17, 4 September 2023 (UTC)]